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for Pulling Her Down

by aishiteru

person kaOtic
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to tell you that I am LOVING your story! Just finished reading chap.3, want more now!!!
Hope you update soon!!! Keep up the awesome work!
person Nekiochan
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm...I'm getting more and more interested in this story.
Inuyasha and Kagome both feel guilty, but they don't
know what to do, well at least not yet to me.

Thank you for answering my question. I appreciate it.
I can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work.



person kestralsbeak
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like where you've gone with this. It's exactly the way I hoped you'd go. You've got the character reactions down to a pat. Great. Look forward to the next installment!
person Mija
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh my that was a totally incredible chapter...I feel sorry for both Kagome and Inuyasha...I mean is she not looking at him because of what she thinks he did to her?? or of her own guilt, thinking maybe that sitting him hurt him like it hurt her and she finally realized it and feels guilty and remorsefull for ever causing him pain.soo.soo many thoughts in my head cant wait to see an update to this, its a great fic please update soon..huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Patricia
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What site do you got your other story on and what is it called. Second question is what ultimately comes out of this; Unchanged status, new arrangement, or removal of the rosary? Just wondering.
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story. It's a different approach then anything else I've read before. Keep it up and I can't wait to read more.
person ~A~
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, still a good story. And so sweet, awww! =) Btw, thanks for replying, most authors don't.
person szmadad
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..this beginning has interesting potential. I think this is one of the first fanfics I've read where Inuyasha doesn't think before having Kagome take the brunt of a "sit" and she actually gets hurt. Your writing is so descriptive...I feel so sorry for Inu even though he started out so thoughtlessly and I wonder what Kagome's reaction is actually going to be.

I also wonder if this might trigger kagome to rethink the rosary...I mean, it is a "leash" she wields over him and while its activation doesn't cause Inuyasha as much pain as it would anyone else...the principle is still bothersome.

I'm looking forward to seeing how you continue the story :)
person Nekiochan
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Whoa--excellent choice of words. Everything in the story was perfect.
And the idea. I don't think I've heard of that idea before. But it's
a damn good one though. If you don't mind, could I ask you how
many parts this story is going to be? Most authors don't say, but
I thought I'd give it a chance. ^_~

Keep up the good work. Your doing beyond great!!
person Inu Half Breed
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what do i think!!!!! i think this stories great. thet, tt, the words you use, the plot again...lol anyway, i think this story is going to be VERY interesting!!






update soooooon pleeeeease!!!!!!!!