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by AliB

person Allison
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! This story was full of so much raw emotion that i practically felt it myself!

But i do have one question...what happened to the condoms...lol
person kagura_798
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think episode 24 and it's called: Mystery of the New Moon and the B Hai Haired InuYasha. Loved ur story!
person unvoicedsigner
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*STARTS TO CLAP HANDS*very well writin i liked it hope theirs a seacuol(how do you spell it)
hope to read more oneshot lemons from you in the near future buh bye
person drake220
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe...i can just see hojo havingideaidea what he's doing in bed. haha!! anyways, cute fic. my fav part was definitly the ending line was great and then A/N "leave my love scenes alone' was absolutely hysterical. i have an idea for a one shot off that. i hope you don't mind if i take that line.
person MelMuff
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fanfic! I loved it. And to answer that trivia, I think Hojo first appeared in episode 13, which is called "The Mystery of the New Moon and the Black-Haired Inuyasha". Lemme know if I'm right or wrong cuz I'm not sure.
person TeaRoses
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
On the one hand I suppose I could be a bit of a b and say that there were a few grammar mistakes and that personally I would have left the first person parts in third person like the rest. On the other hand, I probably shouldn't bother because this was great! Way hotter, steamier, sexier... you get my drift... than anything I've ever written. Pretty in-character too... maybe not the Hojo part entirely but who cares, because it was a great plot development. And that line about "she bitch-slapped her voice of reason" was brilliant, I lvoed it.
person Taiya
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Simply wonderful...Its an amazing story and it fit together so perfectly...I Love It!