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for Goodbye to Us

by Nekessla

person Anon
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person xavior takihasha
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this ruled though u should really make a chapter lemon
person Liz
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Your story is really good, you've writen it very good. Also i'm an author here too
read my story if you want to its called 'Broken Hearts'. Keep up the good work
person reviewer
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I see you fixed the bus/train station mix up. Thanks.
person reviewer
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In chapter 2, you say that Kagome is going to the train station, but in chapter 3, she goes to the bus station instead. That is confusing.
person staind
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I liked this one! Please write more! Can't wait...!!!
person damngarfieldz
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is it over?
person PJ
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool story so far. I hope Kagome isn't gone too long. And I know it is bad but if I was Kagome's mom I might blame Inu at least a little bit. I probably wouldnot have said anything but late at night when alone in the dark I might have those thoughts. At first anyway then later on I would have seen that it was not his fault. Anyway good story update soon.
person Phoenix White
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, poor Kagome! I felt so bad for her in the anime too. Write more now, don't let it go unfinished! Write now now now!

So...where's my box of candy? J/K! ^_^ Write again soon!