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for Eternally Yours

by Atropa

person CWolf
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great! You've opened the door to all sorts of possibilities.
person MistressofDragons
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grin* you are evil. . . i like where this is going though. . . you come up with the most unusual pairings. . .

actually. . . i have come up with an unusual Sango pairing myself but i don't dare write it(het and i don't get along very well. ..) i thought since you seem to like writing Sango alot that you might want to have a go at it. . .

it is a Sanosuke(from Rurouni Kenshin)/Sango. . . i think they would be perfect together. . . Sano has/had the zanbatou(the giant sword thing. . .) and Sango has Hikairotsu(her boomerang. . . hope i spelled it right). . . they are both fighters, independant and really strong(even though Hikairotsu is made of bone it's gotta weigh at least as much as she does. . . making her an extremely strong woman) and have fiery personalities. . . i can see them having a most interesting. . . and steamy relationship if you could contrive to get them together. . . i'd write it but i know i'd butcher the story so i'll leave it to you if you want to tackle it. . .

anyway i hope you write more of this! Vampire Hunter D is one of my favorite anime! ja mata!
person zelix
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehehhe.... this just keeps getting better and better.
person duraonraonis
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yet agian i am amazed at your ability to make the oddest pairings work, and am really interested as to how you are going to take this.
person zelix
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm.. so you need inspiration eh? Here's a few tips:

1. How about Sango has her first run in with some vampire hunters?

2. Sango finds out just how BADLY dunpeals are treated?

3. They have a nice little run in with some church people? (that would be a blast)

As for the review: It keep getting better and better... i hope you find some inspiration from those suggestions.
person nightfall2525
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was good can't what to read when you have them kiss. LEMON
person Shiro Ryu
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last chapter "Run", but it was too short!!!!!!!!!
Please update soon!
Thank you!
^_^
person CWolf
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Loved that chase scene good job on the entire story too.
person zelix
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a cliffie... you're evil :)
person Numisma
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice next chapter, can't wait for more!