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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like Ilike. Very well written. The best I have read so far. Please email me when you have put another chap up:)
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November 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
TY TY TY...finally a story where Naraku isn't so evil!!
Interesting to see Hiten in the story to!!
Oh my goodness on your Dad seeing the story, I would have died, and went 100 shades of red!!
Good Work, very interesting!!
Interesting to see Hiten in the story to!!
Oh my goodness on your Dad seeing the story, I would have died, and went 100 shades of red!!
Good Work, very interesting!!
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have the same lyrical writing style of Jacqueline Carey. Mixing Inuyasha with that makes an interesting homage to Kushiel's Dart. It makes me want to read that book again while I (patiently) wait for your next chapter. ^_^
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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I love your story so far. It's very interesting. Unlike most stories, the prologue wasn't dull and boring and each chapter held my attention. I like Kagome's character design, she's not some whimpering, slobering, and and highly-annoying lap-dog. Good job. To sum it up, you have a really enjoyable story here. I'll just have to wait patiently for the next chapter! :)
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is getting good
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, six shards to find! Will there be six different men who hold the shards? I'm guessing one is Hiten, and one is Sesshoumaru...who else could there be?
Inuyasha?
Miroku?
Inutaisho? (hey, it's AU...he doesn't have to be dead!)
Kouga?
Hojo? (Hm...that would most likely be a very boring lemon.)
Youko Kurama? (I know, I know, it's not a crossover, but a girl can dream, can't she?)
Jaken? (Just kidding. Please, do not take that seriously.)
You have the opportunity to do a wide variety of lemons here, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for your readers.
Inuyasha?
Miroku?
Inutaisho? (hey, it's AU...he doesn't have to be dead!)
Kouga?
Hojo? (Hm...that would most likely be a very boring lemon.)
Youko Kurama? (I know, I know, it's not a crossover, but a girl can dream, can't she?)
Jaken? (Just kidding. Please, do not take that seriously.)
You have the opportunity to do a wide variety of lemons here, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for your readers.
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey good story naraku is too nice but oh ell the story is still good and update soon k?
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I don't normally review, I haven't much time too, but I just had to tell you something. The personal voice in the story is wonderful; very delicate and perfectly capturing the personallity of your Kagome. I wouldn't usually tell people this, as it would be quite insincer, but have you considered writing professionally? Your pacing is well formed and you seem to have a good grasp on cause eff effect with different variable additions (ie: you have the ability to understand different individual modivations). Your writing is a bit rough in some areas- I was too caught up in giving you a review to remember to cite any specific spots- but I don't know of a writer who do't h't have a team of editors correcting their stuff before final print, so there isn't much of a problem there. Really, I intend to check up on you every day hoping for an update to your story.
Sincerly yours,
Alemap
P.S.- Sorry about any spelling errors; no time for spell checker.
I don't normally review, I haven't much time too, but I just had to tell you something. The personal voice in the story is wonderful; very delicate and perfectly capturing the personallity of your Kagome. I wouldn't usually tell people this, as it would be quite insincer, but have you considered writing professionally? Your pacing is well formed and you seem to have a good grasp on cause eff effect with different variable additions (ie: you have the ability to understand different individual modivations). Your writing is a bit rough in some areas- I was too caught up in giving you a review to remember to cite any specific spots- but I don't know of a writer who do't h't have a team of editors correcting their stuff before final print, so there isn't much of a problem there. Really, I intend to check up on you every day hoping for an update to your story.
Sincerly yours,
Alemap
P.S.- Sorry about any spelling errors; no time for spell checker.
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story really looking forward to reading more
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
JEEBUS YOU'RE GOOD! You're better then good.. You're like the best author ever! I just wish your chapters were a little longer and closer together in updating... But I'll wait a year to get the next chapter if I have to. I absolutely love your style, and you're so .... perfect. It's rare you find such perfection on this site. Even some of the best authors make mistakes on things, but your's is magnificent..