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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...Very well written, and I'd love to see this continued!
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job on the newer chapters! I'm so glad to finally read some more of your story...it keeps getting more and more interesting to me. Thanks for the e-mail to let me know you updated! I loved the update!! Keep those chapters rolling.
Much luck and love,
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Much luck and love,
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing development, not exactly a usual pairing, per se. Will Jaken also be in this, I wonder? Most likely, I suppose, but your call in the end. Well, laters.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Story !! The best I read so far, and I did read a lot !!! I hope you will continue soon !!!
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is great great
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely written. I was hooked in the very first chapter. The plot is flowing smoothly and each event is well-planned and placed. I would completely recommend this fic to anyone, regardless of their pairing preference. Although, I must say that S/K is one of my favorites.
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Extremely promising. Am looking forward to more.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am loving this...so dark, yet not too dark...and so well written! *giggle* I know it must've been embarrassing when your father read some of this...but what if he read that last part...?? Ha...anyway, great job...hopefully there'll be much more soon.
Oh I was wondering...if you could remember to, that is, to maybe email me when you update this? You don't have to, but it may take me much much longer to run back across this when you update it because I have such a wacky schedule.
Much love,
=^-.~^=
Oh I was wondering...if you could remember to, that is, to maybe email me when you update this? You don't have to, but it may take me much much longer to run back across this when you update it because I have such a wacky schedule.
Much love,
=^-.~^=
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was HOT.
there are a few spelling/grammatical errors here and there, and some run-on sentences that could be split up, but the content itself is very promising. i would suggest a beta reader simply for fixing up those errors. your writing style is very fluid and elegant, without sounding pretentious.
there are a few spelling/grammatical errors here and there, and some run-on sentences that could be split up, but the content itself is very promising. i would suggest a beta reader simply for fixing up those errors. your writing style is very fluid and elegant, without sounding pretentious.
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your Dad caught you? Lol! I have fanfics on ff.net and my friends founf it and showed the guy I liked what a twisted mind I had, hehe. Well, as per the chapter, another great one! One down-- wait, how many left to go? Lucky Kag.