rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

read the first four chapters of your story before work, then read the rest once I returned home. VERY GOOD STYLE AND STORY. I would love to see more in the future!

Aw! The chapter ended so cute and playful...I loved it! Hope you update soon; I like this story more and more each chapter.

Much <3,
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Oh very good. I love your writing style. This fanfiction is a beautiful masterpiece!

*giggles insanely*

I love how you have written this so far...especaily kagome, She is not a flake. I love it.

The ears...chicks always dig the ears!

Though If I could choose between the two brothers Sesshomaru would be my pic most definatly.

Sel

This is probably the most seductive story I've ever read. You have mastered the art of female persuasion with your cunning words. Honestly, I think the intrigue and deception you've crafted are more erotic than any blatant sex scene I've read. There's a darkness in your story that's only emphasized by the rhythmic lilt of your writing style. Your characterizations are rush and naturally assimilated into our canon knowledge of how these people should and would act. And what an amazing twist with Naraku and Kagome's relationship. That's so original it's frightening. And is it wrong for me to suddenly have a crush on kohaku? Ah well, you write him as a man, a very sexy, brooding one at that. I'm addicted to this story. I can't wait for you to update and expound on Naraku's devious plot further. Really, the lemon can wait, because these chapters are much like very enjoyable foreplay. Amazing work.

This story is absolutely enchanting. It's lyrical quality puts me in mind of fairytales, although with a very erotic twist. It's absolutely lovely. I look forward to reading more of it when you are able.

Poor Inuyasha, everyone wants to play with his ears. Intrigiuing developments, nice how you included Hojo and Miroku, and let me guess who's related that female Kistune, but probably not there since he *is* just a little boy(Or did you age him up, too?). Laters!

Hello....I thought I should try and review like you aske4d....Chap one...you gave a nic prolude but you may have extended just a bit more.....Chap 2 & 3 I liked and thought were solid.....Chap 4 & 5...I like the way you make Kagome think harder and more mature if mind than the series...but stil there is a pleasant softness to her...even though she seemed knid of hornier than some fifteen year old virgins that learn their life is going to be on their "bac' so to speak but I like the change... Chap 5 &6 were ingenius...ANd CHap 7 had me laughin till bout teaars....there I hope you like my review and I eagerly await your next addition...

Keep this story up!!
it is VERY good!!
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