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This is pretty good so far. I hope that you take this up again soon. I'll be watching for another chapter.

BTW, you may want to come in and fix your story, there are a lot of errors ( I think due mainly to AFF.net and not yourself ). And sorry if a lot of people have already mentioned this to you.


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Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh my goodness, this is a very captivating fic. You have a wonderful writing style, and you know just how to use it. Poor Kouga, even though I'm not a huge fan of him, he's okay to me, though. However, are you ever going to come back to this fic?

"not a flame just my honest opinion" I didnt like this story because well i think that because im a guy and have read many other fanfics where Inuyasha is normaly all powerful to solve problemes but in this story it was all Kagome doing something and being super powerful and wise and all the female equality was not realy in my line otereterest but ill tell ya you did good lemons...

good plot i like how you included kouga and kept the original pairings it makes it more believable with kag/inu and mir/san nice job and well detailed this story is AWESOME so far try and pair shippou with sombody later though (prababley rin)and that would be a great twist

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Please Update Soon. It is a great story.

oooh poor Koga..sniffles..Kagura raped him with Naraku's help?? omg poor Koga..and ya the mind game they must of played on him no doubt makes it harder for him, but why is he worried that it will happen to Kagome?? did they threaten to hurt Kagome?? Is that why Koga is affraid for her and of her?? cause he cant protect her when he couldnt protect himself??? ok this is a great story and soo have to read more soo I truelly hope you update soon..and with she demons as strong as the males at times..its no wonder that many male demons hadnt been raped before..sigh..anyhow hope you update soon..ty ty..huggs Mija..:-)

noooooo nooooooooo nooooooooo no cliffy...awwwwwwwwwwwwww how can you do ?? s?? sniffles...I spent most of the night reading all your chaps and frankly i loved the story but I sooooooo hate ciffys even if I do them myself..sigh sowwy..anyway please update sooooooooon k?? pretty please?? alot of peeps forget they started a good fic and just leave it, pe doe dont leave it this one is really really good..:-)

GAH! and people yell at me for my cliffies! I think I know why they do now . . . more please, and soon. The story is really good, and really well written.