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hmm.. lovin' it so far.. but Chap. 15 must be good to take this long lol ^^ ok ok ill be quielt and take a peek everyday and wait.. but plz.. its killin' me to wait so long

u are one amazing writer and not jus this disclaimer but also "kagome! where are you?" and "kagome's return" which im still waiting on :p but the others like "spring fertility festival" and things.. please keep the stories coming im alwayz geting in trouble for staying up hours reading but o well its all worth it since i have nothing else :) tyvm Jessica Um

i really enjoy your story, its very well written. i have spotted a few minor grammatical errors but, eh, the story line is really good. you write nice long chapters so even if you leave out some details you wanted to add, your reader is still satisfied. i like the way you manage to work in real historical facts. so keep up the good work ok?

I would like to see what happens the next time Koga shows up. I have a couple of ideas, what if Kikyo found out what happened, another is an explanation of youkai customs and traditions. I have been reading a lot about human stuff and wondered what youkais did.

...There was, to my somewhat jaded glance, a far better review that I was to post, but in my attempts, it was lost in a connection error. It was one of my more lengthy reviews, and the first under this alias. This was, simply put, magnificent. Well-written. Different, by means of alternative pairings. It would rate, easily, at 9 1/2 on the scale of 1 to 10. Since 10 is the impossible rating... This is, easily, one of the best stories I have ever rea hav have only read a few stories that could be classified as an equal to 'A Shard in Kyoto'. I will certainly be reading whatever else you poKudoKudos to you, jeffs. It takes a lot, for an author, to post a story that might not appeal to the general population of readers. You have earned yourself a position of admiration in my eyes...though perhaps such praise is unnecessary, since I am a fan of all your other works - my reviews are under various signatures. ...Should you ever find yourself in need of a beta-reader, I would be honored to volunteer my services; you would recieve an honest opinion, and correction when needed ( though I have yet to see anything of real concern from you ). It is also a given that you will be seeing many more reviews from me, in the future.
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First of all, chipperish story. I love it when someone takes the original storyline and elaborates it in a way that, instead of making the players go out of character, elaborates on their attributes. Second, excellent work with adhering to the history. Speaking of which, though, the main shogunate dynasty during the Sengoku Jidai was the Ashikaga, with an "a," not Ashikago, with an "o." Though maybe you may've been going for slightly-messing-the-names approach. I've only read the first quarter of the story so far. I think I'll like what I'll read later. It's people like you that make procrastina so so much fun.

lilpapillonbleu

Finally I get to get caught up on all my stories that I've been reading. Great story! I really do enjoy reading your stories! Please keep up the hard work!

I don't know about anyone else but I am thoroughly enjoying this story! I enjoy your writings and I enjoy how you tie in real history with the InuYasha plotline. As a history major, history is what I love. I love reading stories with real history tied in with them. ^-^ If you don't continue the story on AFF.net can you send me an email telling me where you will continue to post it? If you are going to continue it... Please?

Yet another vivid, beautifully detailed, captivating story jeffs. Your attention to culture, history, and minutia make your stories not only entertaining, but a window into another time. Thank you for sharing another great piece with your readers, and I can't wait to read more!

This is a really good story! I really like how you make it accurate! I've been interested in Japanese history and I'm planning on taking a class on it next Spring semester in my college. ^-^

I really do enjoy all your stories and I hope you get to update soon. I'll aitiaiting and will review when you update! ^-^ Ja ne!