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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha and Miroku are so cute. I'm glad you added Miroku and sango to the story. What a great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ukaran? Naraku?
also, Ityusia? Sian?
meh. nice fic so far. needs a few typos to be fixed, but nice beginning. you've got a good tone and and good style going on so far. like that.
also, Ityusia? Sian?
meh. nice fic so far. needs a few typos to be fixed, but nice beginning. you've got a good tone and and good style going on so far. like that.
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that it is very good. Somethings are sort of confusing- like the incident with Inuyasha in the grocery store was sort of quick and random like. Now as to why I found it to be that way, ... maybe you could have defined it a little more, or maybe I am just a Dolt (the second is always a given with me: I try to think of ways to be constructive when I review, but to be honest I really hate to.) I realy thought that it was very interesting, and I really couldn't find much of anything that gave me an OFF feeling about it at all.
Why was Inu watching the tapes??
Anyway, sorry for rambling! Good story, I will try to be more coherent next time I review! >_< !
Why was Inu watching the tapes??
Anyway, sorry for rambling! Good story, I will try to be more coherent next time I review! >_< !
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic so far. I kinda wish the last chapter had been longer, but can't be helped. What was the 62-chapter book you were reading? I really like long chapters, so I was glad to read that you do as well (I'm assuming you write them also? ^_^) Anyhoo, can't wait for the update!
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!! This is a really good story, and it looks like your off to a perfect start! I really hope you continue writing this! Ja Ne
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Why hello there my lil friend ull never ever guess who this is but ill give u a hint if i wanted to i could come to ur house right now and eat all of ur olives heheheh ahh damnit now i want olives see what u made me do sheesh its all ur fault lol soo ur really doing good on this new story but what was it u said to me not long ago? dont start a new story until uve at least finished the last one? oh well i c ur too good for ur own advice but what can i do about it meh i will continue to read it as u progress no matter how depressing or sick and twisted u decide to make it cuz im a good supportive friend and thats what friends do right? and as for me well im not much of a writer so icant join u in ur lil escapade of all typiness but uve gotten really good but dont u just wish that u could talk as good as u talk? i do. god knows id actually be able to understand u. well its like 11:30 right now and im still up reading nasty dirty naughty stories as per usual lol. but u just suighned on so id better go talk to u bye bye luv twitchy.
Why hello there my lil friend ull never ever guess who this is but ill give u a hint if i wanted to i could come to ur house right now and eat all of ur olives heheheh ahh damnit now i want olives see what u made me do sheesh its all ur fault lol soo ur really doing good on this new story but what was it u said to me not long ago? dont start a new story until uve at least finished the last one? oh well i c ur too good for ur own advice but what can i do about it meh i will continue to read it as u progress no matter how depressing or sick and twisted u decide to make it cuz im a good supportive friend and thats what friends do right? and as for me well im not much of a writer so icant join u in ur lil escapade of all typiness but uve gotten really good but dont u just wish that u could talk as good as u talk? i do. god knows id actually be able to understand u. well its like 11:30 right now and im still up reading nasty dirty naughty stories as per usual lol. but u just suighned on so id better go talk to u bye bye luv twitchy.
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first of what I hope will be many chapters. You have a wonderful beginning to a story that many people should think more about. please continue writing this story. I hope to read more very soon.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more chapters! This sounds so good! I want to know what happens next! =^-^=
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love the start of this fanfiction. I would really be interested in reading later chapters.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh helll noooooooooo...Kags needs to kick his ass to the curb and take HALF or everything he friggen own...hate men who abuse thier wifes gf etc and then have the nerve to tell the to shut up and act like noting is wrong??? and aint it totally sad how some of us gals are just plain stupid and actually listen to thier chit??? sigh..dont know if youve read any of my fics, Forever Pain in particual but if you did you would know how much this subject gets me riled...ooh dont get me wrong I absolutly love the fic I think it gots way lots of promise and I sooooooo cant wait to read more I love fics..angsty, sad, happy, lemony, all of em...just needed to say my two cents about where I think Kags hubby can go...*cough-cough-hel*..now that that is said...hehe you must continue must find out how Kags meets Kags and when peeps will find out about her unhappiness and abuse..and if some loving with Inu will be good or make her hubby go balistic...will Inu kick his butt??? maybe Sango??? would love to see that..hehe anyhow please update soon k??? enough of my stupid rambling I like this fic so far and cant wait for more...ty ty ty much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)..ps if you cant tell....I was one of them stupid gals who actually listened to my old mans bullshit as he beat me...I grew up now..aint no man touching me again..like that..EVAH! Ha..hehe...sowwy..I will shut up now..hehe..huggles