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for The Price of Vengeance

by YoukaiFate

person Neko_Chaos
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story! It's just as great as the story "The Lucky Ones" that you mentioned earlier! My only request is that you put more Sess/Kag into the story. I was starting to miss Fluffy for awhile, (sadness!) i'm going to keep checking back to see when you up date cause i'm anxious to see what happens... Also I was wondering if you had some sort of grudge against Miroku? Poor Guy seems to be getting the short end of the stick! Hehe.

Neko_Chaos-chan
person Angelicmaiden
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I just spent two days reading this. Don't stop now, PLEASE! I need to know what is going to happen! LOL.
Great job! You are a very talented writer. ^.^
person Fairia13
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fate - Wow girl, I'm so glad you finally updated! The chapters were awesome, and hella long too! It's hilarious what you're doing with Jaken; though I'm not particularly interested in him as anything other than a possible football, I love the way you use him as comic relief. How do you think he'll react when he finds out Kagome's preggers? I'm going to predict open mouth, insert foot and the probability of an immineient attack on eith Kagome's part or Sesshomaru's. It would be funny, I think, if Kagome went off on him and put the fear of God poor Sexxxomaru, who's standing on the sidelines. (Sorta like O.O; on Sessy's part...)

And I loved what you did with Niaya - where did you get that name? Anywaym thank you so much for that, it was stupendous!

person ICYGIRL
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT4S A WONDERFUL STORY FULL OF EMOTIONS ; the pairings are good and characters feelings are ver well-analySed.SO PLEASE DON't give up this wonderful story and i hope you will update soon.i enjoy it!! DON't give up !! good luck i can't wait to know the next chapters .
person Supi_chan1026
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASE, write another chapteeer reeaaally soon. I just can't wait . don't let us your faithful readers down.... =P
person Courtney
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, THIS STORY SO ROCKS!
Write more PLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASE!
I can't wait the suspense is KILLIN ME @_@!
person OtakuSailorV
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good update. ^^ I loved it, as always. Nice job and keep it up. Happy Holidays, btw.
person kenoshi
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update soon with more on Kagome and Sesshoumaru.
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, once again. ^^ Keep up the good work.
person Fairia13
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! Yays..she lives again....

Too bad I don't....

*totters blearily off to bed on temporarily lame knee...*

Good job chick, but you knew that.

*passes out*