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for The Price of Vengeance

by YoukaiFate

person shiro Ryu
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, "Inuyasha and Sango sitting in a tree..."(well leaping in the trees)... now how does the rest of the song go? Oh yeah... "K I S S I N G"..., so are we going to see any of that? Hmmm? Liked your last chapter, and as usual, I can't wait for more! ^_^
person migele
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
partly very dark.
will it be an inu/kago or Sess/kago?

makes you wonder sometimes...

migi
person raining
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a great fic. I think you did an outstanding job. I just have one question, "Inuyasha", where in the hell did that come from. Sess is the man, he has no equals. NONE. I wonder what you are up to. Either wa can can't wait to see. So please update soon.
person Shiro Ryu
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My god, that was so sad. Why did she call out Inuyasha's name? Poor Sesshoumaru! And now, Poor Kagome! She probably does not realise what happened.
person gentle but sweet!
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Geeze that is so awesome, write some more, i feel a bit sorry for kagome, she's like being raped by the coolest inu. Hmm wondered what will happen, hope you accept annomous (sorry if spelled that wrong) review!

Sugoi, more!

Arigato for the nice story :)
person puffin
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok let me see if I have this rigth. They made love all night long and because Kagomas was half-sleep she whisper Inuyasha's name. At this Sesshy became in rage at her because he felt hurt because he has fallin in love with Kagoma. Do I have this right? I am a little confused. Even with me beeing confused I still think that its written well anstilstill want to know when you update. Thank you for emailing and keep the chapters coming and keep up the good work.
person puffin
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Frist off let me tell you this is a great story. And thank you for emailing when you updated. The part about Kagoma purified the potion in her tea by her touch was very funny. I mean i as lmao. Also who is Koharu? Please keep emailing when you update, keep the chapters coming and keep up with the great work on this story.
person Shiro Ryu
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Koharu ... interesting ... I think I see a twist in the couples coming up. ^_^
I can't wait for your next update!
Thank you.
person migele
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice.

kiyo seems a little uninformed.

I wonder how Kago will react once she realizes what happened...

migi
person puffin
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I realy like the story. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Are Kagoma and Sesshomaru going to fall in love with each other or is he just going to keep using her. Ether way I can't wait to see what happen next. Please email as soon as you have the next chapter up and keep up the good work.