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for The Price of Vengeance

by YoukaiFate

person akuma_river
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Poor Kagome was exhausted and barely coherent and she sees silver hair and golden eyes of course the first thought to her is Inu-Yasha not Sesshoumaru who she barely knows and rarely til now had contact except to escape his wrath for his brother and the Tessaiga. I feel so sorry for her she is going to be hurting for a while. Btw is she going to become pregnant from that night? Will she meet up with Inu-Yasha? What will he think especially since she gave herself to his hated half-brother. Until the very end it was consenual. What will become of them? Great story. Keep up the good work.
person puffin
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!!!!! What a chapter. He sent Kagoma back to Inuyasha used. He want to see how Inuyasha would react to it and now he doesn't care. Is he starting to like her? Does he miss her? I have to read the next chapter soon. Please email when you get it up. Please update soon and keep up with the good work.
person migele
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He is plotting his own destruction.

He will break upon which should break others.
He will despair with what he gave away.
He will kill his heart as wanted to do to others.

migi
person AMYFUSHIGIYUGI
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know this is one of the best fics i have read in a long time and am glad to see that you are keeping it up
i cant beleave how good it really is ^_^ and i have to tell you that the sex scene was great and the way he got angery when she said inu yasha's name that was even better all together its a great story and i hope you continue writing it. i would like to post the link to the story to my group i think they would love it oh and if u want to join the group please email me and ill send u a invite we would love to have you
person Feminafures
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Kags, what a little bastard Jaken is. I say kill the worthless toad, off with his head!!!
Update soon!

Gia
person Neo_Neko_Youkai
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I wonder what happens next, I've read other Sess/Kagome and they are superb! and some are boring *Yawn


Sesshomaru needs some lovin by Kagome?? Is that why he aahh raped her?
What is taking Inuyasha so long to find her, is he a bit dumb or something :P :)

I've found some mistakes on the chapter part, it said chapter 24 on the title description and you posted chapter 23

Good, GOOD GOOD!!!!

JA NE!!
person Shiro Ryu
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sad for Kagome and Sesshoumaru. So much misunderstanding.
As always, I loved the chapter and can't wait for more!
person puffin
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Onces again I want to thank you for emailing to let me know the chapter is up. Please keep emailing. The story is getting better and better as each chapter is put up. Alsank ank you for clearing things up for me. Are you going to have Sango and Inuyasha fall for each other? Just idea. Please keep the chapters coming and keep up the great work.
person Feminafures
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Arigato! I loved your lemon scenes, though I feel a bit sorry for Kagome. I keep wondering if she really rejected him or she was just groggy? Oh well, I'll have to wait and see.

Gia
person Tom
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hellow Y.F.. I now am home after getting shot at in Iraq. I trust my wife reveiw well. Urrah
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