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for The Price of Vengeance

by YoukaiFate

person Neo_Neko_Youkai
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe!!

Finally she's pregnant or assuming she is. Hmm what would be the sex of the baby though????


I wanna know what happens next, Thanks 4 email!!!


Ok 2 thumbs up

person puffin
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Keep it up and thank you for emailing every time a new chapter comes out. Keep it up.
person puffin
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man all that Kagoma is now worried about. I feel sorry for her. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep it up.
person Tom
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
We aren't offline. Though we have been fighting spyware. Well this story is getting good no doubt about that.
person Deborah L.
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter/installment! And what a good cliffie. I can't wait for the next chapter. . .keep up the good work!
person akuma_river
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter. So is Inu going to get his ass tore up or is Sess going to know defeat? I think it would be the former if based upon the series. But since you went on a different path it is anyone's guess since this would be the first time Sess sess Inu as a full demon. In the series he was at first and still is in a way scared of the full demon Inu. But by learning the circumstances for the creation of Tessaiga he learns to pity his brother to a point where he sort of earns some respect. He doesn't fully respect until he kills Ryokotssei sp.. but he does over time earn it. But this is a whole new ballgame. Heck Naraku could be bi in here and is upset that he can't get Inu. If you think about it Naraku killed Kikyo who was supposed to be the girl he "loved". And now he spends all his time making Inu miserable. Why? Could he his little obsession of the hanyou has turned into something else? Anyways I am just rambling and getting some steam off. Loved the chapter keep up the great work.
person inƨin
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you ones againg for emailing me. Please keep emailing me. I really like the chapters. I can't wait to see how or who clams Inuyasha down. Keep it up.
person akuma_river
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did Keade take away the memories or just the pain of the event to Kagome? But if she took the memories how will Kagome or anyone of them for that matter react to an interaction between her and Sess, or Inu and the others? Is she pregnant? How will Inu react when they find her. Won't he be able to smell the changes and Sess on her? Anyways love the story. Keep up the excellent work.
person Tom
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still good.
person Neo_Neko_Youkai
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
eh, this chapter 28 i think is ok, but nothing much of an action part.

Thanks 4 update on your story :) Cool!!

Update more on this story wanna know what happens to Kagome and a bit of sesshomaru and the gang