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for The Price of Vengeance

by YoukaiFate

person amyfushigiyugi
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ackkkkkkkkkk
kagome is still by herself wahhhhhhhhhhh
get either inuyasha there or sessy she needs someone to fight with or to play with
or something lol she is twittleing her thumbs
more more more
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Miroku might be a father. Will he stay with the mother of his child or try to win over Sango again.
person Feminafures
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think Viz(or whoever's in charge) should hire you as an episode writer because that was much better than the American version. Seriously that chapter kicked ass, you have quite a talent for describing dark imagery!
person Tom
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is still good.
person puffin
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Sango and Inuyasha are going to be pairing up. I like it. Keep it up. And thank you ones again for emailing when you update. Please keep emailing me.
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so Sango and InuYasha will become a couple, right? Well if that's the case, I hope Kagome won't get jealous and hopefully InuYasha won't get too upset that she bedded with his brother. I also hope Miroku takes this as a good sign, since he's already getting hot and heavy with someone else (can't remember ner name). Oh, so Kagome might not be the only girl pregnant, it will probably be Miroku's girl. Since it seems as though they've been sleeping around, even if you've only written oral settings with them. Anyway, I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
person Feminafures
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chappies..Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happems between Inu and Sess.
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. So Kagome might be pregnant. What will Sesshomaru do if she is? I certainly hope he'll come back for her. That crescent mark on Kagome's neck, is that a mating mark or something else?
person amyfushigiyugi
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yayy another chappy gr where is my sesshomaru hehe i want him back ^_^
more for sessy more for sessy
how is he feeling now that he let kagome go?
i do hope it is eating away at he hehehe and i hope the feeling pisses him off so bad
that he goes gets her again ::insert evil grin::
update soon with this great story!!!!!!!!!!!
person Tom
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keeps getting more interesting