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for Revealed Desires

by loviasilverleaf

person Sailor Black 666
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was a great Lemon! But I want to know what happens after! What does her mom and grandpa think? And what about her friends in both eras?! Oh well it was still a great story!
person RurouniTiki
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so what happen next?!!! up date!
person nutmeg
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was acually pretty good, you sure its your first try? You should write more of these, 5 stars for you.
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person inuyasha
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a++++ a wonderful story that was well written and.....very arousing. hope to see more soon
person lemonbarqueen
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! Keep up the good work on some more stories!!
person DogDemoness
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON I CAN'T WAIT INTIL U UPDATE ALERT ME WHEN YOU DO!!!!!!
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought overall it was pretty good, good job
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. i am reading this late at night... gud fic, plz read and reveiw mine for me!
person dani
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was one of the best lemons i've read!!!