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for Revealed Desires

by loviasilverleaf

person Megan Consoer
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Lumbee
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I've heard this somewhere else.
person Sess_2005
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn! that was a real good story there. i now want to go mate with somebody as well. you do a good job in this.
person nani
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i want the next chapter because the story is not finish.but i live the first chapter your a real master of fanfiction!
person mary-kate paola
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
my god!!!!!!!this is relly hot your story!!!!!please write the next chapter!!!!!!!
person angel
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sobing* that was not of the best and most heated lemons I've ever read
person LadySara
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and made sense in the beginning
person Kuro
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story kicked ass....i love storys like this and therelly lly hard to find(i just found out about this site so yeah)write more please ^_^
person akire
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was sooo sweet! it was a great lemon!!
~akire ^_^\/
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