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for It's Something Beautiful

by Asereje

person admire&desire
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*tear* that was the most touching story i have ever read... it was the best one-shot and didn't require a lemon. in other words, it was purely a work of art... beautiful. your storiee jue just so touching! write on! but don't make another chapter for this one-shot, make a different story to follow it up, a sequel if you will... cuz a continuing chapter would lessen the magic of the beautiful one-shot... some stories drag on and get worse, some get better, and some stay with the same quality... but i think, even though you are a very skilled writer, you should keep it one chapter to leave people feeling most touched and warmed of the upcoming or past memories of true love. Isn't romance sweet?

well, arigatou for reading my reveiw.

Ja ne...
~admire&desire~
person Kellie
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet story. Great job ^__^
person Eustace Nguyen
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa... this is deep