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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked it alot..who would have knowed that kagome was such a freak but damn inuyasha's an ass when he is hald-demon and an overly sensitive pansy when he is human. damn boy always seems to be PMS-ing. but good work none the less
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the ending on this, how you mixed what she was remembering and what Inuyasha was saying. Great stuff. I'm not a huge fan of sex toys myself, so I was glad that they didn't use them (sue me, I'm a traditionalist....). I'm a huge fan of your's, keep writing!!!! ^_^
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good sex, sweet ending and great writing. It's got it all, Maven. thanks for writing it!
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHAHAHA *ahem* ok, kag's into leather,bondage, and aparently learning new things...ok i'll buy that. hehe poor inu....or lucky inu, which ever way ya wanna c it i guess. neway awesum 3rd chappie, cna't wait til #4. plz post it soon. mmm yummieness.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know, this is a really cute, really sexy little piece and I am totally loving it. Go Kinky Kagome! I don't get why she's having issues with him growling though. The growl is so sexy, so primal... I guess I'm just a bit hentai myself.
If you really look at the piece long enough you can see some of the odd pressures and preconseptions about sex the modern world has about sex. The whole bondage thing.. well, can't say much against it myself, but I'm sure it would sound weird to some people, especially if they were a sexually repressed group.
I would so laugh if you pulled a "Say my name, bitch!" a la American Pie where Kagome totally dominated poor Inuyasha. ROFL. Oh god that would be funny!
Keep writing more! I'm gonna keep reading.
If you really look at the piece long enough you can see some of the odd pressures and preconseptions about sex the modern world has about sex. The whole bondage thing.. well, can't say much against it myself, but I'm sure it would sound weird to some people, especially if they were a sexually repressed group.
I would so laugh if you pulled a "Say my name, bitch!" a la American Pie where Kagome totally dominated poor Inuyasha. ROFL. Oh god that would be funny!
Keep writing more! I'm gonna keep reading.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
meow how nice
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, how long have you had this one? i thought i read all your stuff! oh well, a pleasant surprise. cute though kagome's a bit freaky...mask? sheesh....! but the whip cream's a nice little thing to elaborate on......(and the whip.....hehe...smut monster ses aes again!)
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! In one word, HILARIOUS. Really. I couldn't stop laughing after I
read all 3 chappies! And I was in the middle of drinking when I did that, so
imagine what would've happened to my monitor if I hadn't reached for the
tissue in time. ^_^ Really great imagination, I think this is the 1st time I've
seen one written like this. I'm thinking you're going to lead us on one hell
of a merry chase before this is over. hehehe. So hope you update & keep
up the good work!!!
read all 3 chappies! And I was in the middle of drinking when I did that, so
imagine what would've happened to my monitor if I hadn't reached for the
tissue in time. ^_^ Really great imagination, I think this is the 1st time I've
seen one written like this. I'm thinking you're going to lead us on one hell
of a merry chase before this is over. hehehe. So hope you update & keep
up the good work!!!
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
danng I wanna know how big is he no far