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by theMaven

person Joanna
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very fun! The transition from sweet virginal come-ons to the sex toys was pretty sudden, but all in all I enjoyed this story very much. The emphasis on the difference between Human and Hanyou Inuyasha was amusing, and the little quips and double-entendres were cute and endearing. The sex toys were fun and playful, but I think I personally would have preferred a less OOC approach. Very hot though! Yes yes I like these fics - they stimulate my imagination! ^__^ Thanks!
person Michelle-Winchell
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol...Loved the ending..

It was pretty good all the way thru ! ! :)

Sel~
person Aislynn PK
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice. I enjoyed this story! I love the way you have Inuyasha in his human state... It does seem as though he would express his feelings better. I wish there had been more to the story, I wasn't ready for it to end so soon! Their relationship seems like it will turn out to be VERY interesting. Never thought Kags had it in her though!! Great work...

PK
person kiiru
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely beautiful but... is is just me or did it kind of slip his mind he screwed her?
person onomiyaki
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incredible! It's amazing!
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHA man i loved the ending to the epiloge....man what kind of videos was kagome watching?!? lol
person Decoy
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story...
I would have liked for kagome to try out some of her "things" and let Inuyahsa watch.
person ColShaLin
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this!! A great lemon and great humor woven together perfectly.
"Where's the off switch on this thing?"
"That DEFINITELY wasn't it!"
Good God, I almost fell off my chair! Awesome work! Thanks for sharing!
person drake220
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
weee!! loved it!!! fabulous ending with great humor!!!
person KikiAnn1RosEl1Derf2
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Stellar story hope you write more like this you could do one of Kagome giving advice to Sango and then Sango and Mirokou doing something sim.