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for Lay With Me

by theMaven

schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...I think I need a shower after this little bit!! Yes...a shower definitely!! Until next time!! ^_^
person Shadiyaray
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my second time reading this and I LOVE IT!!
person Kanzen ne Tsuki
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was entirely one of the sweetest things I've read in a long, long time.
Well, done my dear. If its a one shot... Bravo! If not, I can't wait for more. Be that as it may... I hope you don't mind if I add it to my collection of story links on my website. www.tsukisan46.com/heartoftheflamingsword.html
I also write fanfiction. but I write most Kenshin... but I love Inyasha... and I have a page all pristine and dedicated just for him. you need to write more.
respectfully, tsuki-san
person drake220
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
see, now its a fic like this that shows me why i think you are one of the best writers on these sites! this fic was incredible. simply put it was erotic innocence in the best sense of the phrase. it wasn't overly descriptive but you used lanugage that communicated exactly what was felt and said- it was just a joy to read.
person alien_ryoko
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SO WAFFy, SO STEAMY, SO FUNNY...............so... BEAUTIFUL!!!! i luved this fic; i wish there were more like it. ty 4 the awesum 1- shot, and i'll keep a look out 4 more of ur fics.
ryoko-chan *^___~=v
person Ickabod119
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice, I think that is proabably the most realistic lemon between Inuyasha & Kagome. It fellowed their charactiztion perfect and it was hot. Now please post more stories reguarding my fav couple. Awesome Maven
person Kiley
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww...How completely cute! I loved it! Please write more lemons! ^_^
person Shaid
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cute. Yeah, Mom walking in, BAD. Take it from me, My ex's mom walked in on us once... ::shudder:: all she did was smile and say "Good morning, guys! Sleep well?" Most embarrassing moment of my life... except for the old 60 yr old at the hot springs who watched us when we... nevermind.

Cute story.
person Nina
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really sweet and really cute. I just loved it. Great job.
person ladykaa28
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Both of them should be ashamed of them selves. You never do it when it's quiet in the house. That's when every one can hear you. But I like this fic just the same.