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One of my favorite Inuyasha/Kagome stories ever! I like how you paced their dialogue and the action =), and great depiction of their relationship. Cute moment for them both, loved the description. Great job!

That was wonderful! @_@

I have been sitting here for hours looking for a good Inuyasha/Kagome fic, and wow it pays to keep looking! It was witty, the dialogue was so clear and NO errors... I liked how you had them saying "Kagome" and "Inuyasha" just like in the anime...lol! But it was so sweet... it wasn't overly graphic, it was LOVE MAKING!! I hope you have done more on this paring, and if not please DO MORE! You did an excellent job in this, and it wasn't smutty and raw like so many I/K fics I've read out here (not that I'm bashing those fic because I do like to read them from time to time), but sometimes a girl has to have a nicely romantic story to read to leave her all fuzzy inside.

Thanks so much! (had to re-edit review, sorry.)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Awww, that was lurvely!
Bravo!

So hot! Very well-written. Is there a sequel?

Fantastic one shot...very cute, very hot...

Very cute! You are a gifted writer.

that was incredible stuff

Great one shot. But might I suggest that you use less blunt terms. Like instead of penis his swollen member and instead of sperm his seed. Just things like that. I've read a few one shots and it just sounds better. I'm not perverted I swear I just know what sounds better.

The story was awsome!