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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. is all i can say. your grammar and writing style is excellent! you potray everything realistically, and you write very convincingly. this is a wonderful story an di cant wait for the next chapter!
your new fan, Dani
your new fan, Dani
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
INTERESTING, VERY INTERESTING...I THINK THAT THIS STORY HOLDS GRATE PROMISE OF BECOMEING SOMETHING MORE, AND I TRULY HOPE THAT YOU ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS FIC SOON....I AM ALSO LOOKING FORWORD TO SOME STEAMY LOVE SCENS..[I.E. AS IN LEMONS....HEH, HEH, SORRY DON'T MIND ME, IUST MY DARK HENTAI SIDE COMEING OUT.] ANYHOO TOTALY LOVE YOUR WORK, AND I HOPE THAT YOU KEEP WRITING.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. I will enjoy reading this story as you re-post it. Big fun! I thought you did a great job on introducing the 'new, improved' Sesshoumaru to Kagome. It was a nice touch to change the name as well--it would be a bit awkward to live with humans with a name like Perfect Killer or however its translated.
Looking forward to the meeting and q & a session in the next chapter.
Looking forward to the meeting and q & a session in the next chapter.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, this is a different sort of fic, but quite nice! I am enjoying reading Sesshoumaru's and Kagome's introspection. And, the fan girl thing (for Sess) was very funny.
I especially enjoyed the interaction between human Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru--its was touching and believable.
Oh, the cliffie at the end was tough--you must love to torture your readers. But, I enjoyed the last line about finding Sesshoumaru there being worse than finding a robber/rapist--ha ha. Am very much looking forward to seeing their interaction in the next chapter.
I especially enjoyed the interaction between human Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru--its was touching and believable.
Oh, the cliffie at the end was tough--you must love to torture your readers. But, I enjoyed the last line about finding Sesshoumaru there being worse than finding a robber/rapist--ha ha. Am very much looking forward to seeing their interaction in the next chapter.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, read your AN about the chapters from this fic being deleted accidently. I would love to read the entire fic, especially sine you have parts of the sequel up already. Is there anywhere I can read it in its entirity? Do you have it posted elsewhere? Are you planning on posting the chapters on AFF again, one by one.
Whatever the case, looking very much forward to reading it, and afterwards the sequel.
Whatever the case, looking very much forward to reading it, and afterwards the sequel.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story, I had always cotemplating about what if's for after the seriess(which I haven't finished just yet) and this happened to be one of them.. Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Where do I start? First off, when I first started reading, I thought, naaa, but kept going. Then I couldnt stop. You had me from page one. lol, I sit here and I find myself at a loss for words of how the story made me feel. In a word, captivated.It was great. nothing what I expected. I was telling my youngest son ,(26), the jist of your story and now he wants to read it as well. He thought I bought a book, then I told him where I found your story. All I know it kept me glued to my computer. Keep writing, your good at it.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't end the story here....like this!! Tell us how they lived and were they happy and was Sess still a jealous fool?? Come on please tell us just a little more of their adventures!!
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Story. My hands are shaking from reading it. It kept on the egde of my seat while reading it. Can't wait to read more.
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved the 'game', the 'ritual'. It was absolutely wonderful. I feel sorry for them though that the first time had to be so bad. Well, I look forward to the next chappie.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave