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Find myself drawn to the new sessy. Speacialy that last part! >.< So so hottness. ^_^ Anyways enough of my rambling, please continue this story, and update soon. Kagome shoulda kissed him while she was drunk and had the chance, I woulda! >.> Prob woulda ended bad.... but still gots to take chances lol. Update soon, and as a last min thought hurry i love this story!

More abrupt questions from Sess (money), but Kagome seemed glad to help. It is interesting to note their different reactions to the most subtle words/action. Noticed he ran back to sneak a peak at Kagome like the stalker he is.

The drive in the car was fun. My fav line went something like 'watching him switch gears was pornographic'. I got a little confused about Kagome's reaction--was he sensing that she felt attraction. Based on his musings, Sesshoumaru seems to be going through some kind of youkai renaissance! His emotions are awakening (?) and he's becoming interested in connecting with those around him--or Kagome at least! The hand holding was very touching, as well as Kagome's reaction to the prayer beads (and Sess's awkwardness heh heh).

Wow--that was a powerful ending--got me all charged up. I liked the set up of the entire chapter as well, of course. I liked the line about Sesshoumaru speaking of himself as an 'old evil...'. But, again, was not certain what you meant to have happened between the two of them--did they simply embrace, was it something sexual (since he had to dress her for bed)? Have come to the conclusion that you enjoy teasing us readers, you bad girl you! Great chapter. Can't wait for the next.

Wow--there are now several new chapters--yeah! Am experiencing time-management issues this week, so won't be able to read them all at one sitting (very sad about this, btw). Another great chapter--I enjoyed the descriptions of Kagome getting all fixed up--Sess is such a stalker! Your description of Sesshoumaru on the couch was terrific, back to his old self, unchanged by time (inner fangirl goes nuts). I liked the pony tail. Was picking out his clothes a challenge? I know I never can think of what he would wear--modern, classic, designer, hip? Yours fit just fine. You seem to give each chapter a stong finish--which is nice. Their dialogue and thoughts at the end shows them warming up, but then Sess just drops the bomb about watching her for years. Kagome's thought that he could make any statment sound nice was funny.

Oh, oh, do I really have to stop reading? This was such a great chapter. You really shocked your readers, as well as Kagome, with that little 'eating and drinking' questions. I think I blushed red too! The entire conversation was well-done, including that part and beyond. I'm glad that Sesshoumaru sees Kagome as an equal--it will make for some interesting conversations, and maybe a little more soul searching, between the two of them. Very much looking forward to it. As for your editing, you seem to be doing a fine job. It flows well and did not notice any errors. *sob* may have to read and review the rest later.

holy crap. more awesomness. please continue! PLEASE

I loved this story the first time I read it. Wasn't it posted finished somewhere else? Are you the original author?

AHH! once again, superb!

I can't wait until you finish re-posting this story. The first time it slipped past me, but luckily I found it. So far it is very realistic, which puts it high in my book. Realistic stories seem to be the only kind I can stomach. They are all I read and write. Please re-post quickly!

I really enjoyed reading the story, it is interesting to see Sesshomaru so... well, shy...and Kagome's reaction.
Update soon!!!!