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wow! This is so intense! I LOVE IT!! It has even brought me to tears a few times! I simply cannot wait for more!!! GREAT JOB!!! awesome!

This chapter was, was...incredible! It began with a few innocent and fun situations--Kagome talking to friends with a little motherly interference, awkward phone conversations, Kag enjoying the drive to the beach. But then you heated things up a bit with Sess's practice and Kagome's reaction. The scene of advancing and retreating in the water really made sense somehow--your perception of how Sess's instincts might drive his actions is perceptive. I also like how you make Sess so blunt--he would not have the typical human reservations about discussing relationships, intentions, and even sex, would he? The blood tasting scene after was nothing if not completely HOT! You left us with quite a cliffhanger. I can only hope you update soon *pluuuease*.

Woah! Chapter 1, and you've got the canon for the ending of InuYasha right! However, knowing what I know of R. Takahashi's works, that would be the ending with a 'happily ever after'.

Nice A/U continuation you have though.

very very very very very good,, wonderful writing style entrancing really

*tears* there are more chaps out there * tears, wishin she had caught this flic before you started reposting* Update soon please....thank you

once again, brilliance. i absolutely love your work!

Absolutely spellbinding. Damn, he's violent. I wonder if Kagome could handle a night of passion with him. Geeze! Great chapter.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

I'm so shocked, and mighty pleased! I never would have expected you to have the two of them move so fast after all Sesshoumaru's gentlemanly behavior. And that was one hot almost-love scene. What was particularly great about this chapter was your portrayal of Sess. You weren't afraid to give him a violent and dark side. It was nice as well that you had Kagome be fairly accepting of it, and it was funny how it shocked Sesshoumaru. Thanks for the treat.

I love this story!! I mean I LOOOVVVEEE this story!! It's original and moderately paced. I can't wait for the next chappie. Great job!!

Lovely chapter! The conversation, settings, and Kagome's thoughts on Sess's personality were beautifully written. Some of your descriptions really left a strong impression with me. Also, this chapter, though low in action seemed to flow more smoothly than the previous few. I'll be looking forward to more chapter updates.