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person Bianca
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD THIS STORY IS SO FUCKING COOL!! I usually don't like the Sess/Kag pairing but this story got to me. Wow keep going with this because you stopped at the good part.^_^ I mean it sucks that Inuyasha died though. I wish he didn't. And the other thing that sucks is that the well was sealed too. I hope in this story that Kagome meets Shippou. I really do. Because I love the little crdder^_^. Well update SOON!!!!!
person RainStorm
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was the quickest first time sex I've ever read. I take it you're captivating your audiance, and it worked on me. Was it rape, did he severely hurt her? Please don't take long to update, because I want to know what's going on. Keep up the good work. PEACE!!!
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm speechless! I'm really having a difficult time putting my reaction to this chapter into words. That was such a powerful scene. Both their reactions to the encounter were intense. And to think Sess had the nerve to feel guilty about it Afterwards - heh. I liked how he trembled in the end there--both similar and vastly different from his previous actions. I love how you used the 'challenge, retreat, chase...', it rings true. And that Sara McLachlan song quote--how fitting was that?
person NewKitty
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*waiting on edge of seat*
person Snowfall
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this last chapter. You know I love the game. Sess lost it. It's going to take a lot of his blood to fix her this time I'll bet. What I want to know is if he went all the way. I mean, it appears so but doesn't expressly say it. I wonder if Kag's got more than she bargained for. Anywho, awesome chapter.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This freakin' rocks.
person RainStorm
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! It's very well written and I love the plot. Please allow Sessh and Kagome to go and find Shippo and Kouga. Don't forget Kouga. I like the way you allow both characters to stay true to themselves. It has to be so difficult for Sessh to live in today's world, when the world contrast his true self, the beast within. Kagome isn't having a nicer time with her heart in the past , so both are living a lie. What's the answer to their problem. Obviously it's within each other. Please keep you're creative hat on, because my hat is off to you so far. Keep up the good work. PEACE!!!
person Shard
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the chance to read this story again. It's one of my favorites but I had forgotten the title, thaks for reposting it. I have been wondering if you thought of continuing where this one leaves off, if so that would be so cool. Once again a pleasure to read this one again and hope to read more from you in the future.
person weezer chi - Dani
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooh awesome. i really liked these two chaps - i wanna know what happens next! ^_^

just to let you know, i will be gone for the next six weeks miles away from internet and such. at a camp in the mountains.. but i will finish reading this fic when i return.
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are too sweet--two chapters. And this first (11) as brooding and tense, but in a very good way. The sexual tension was terrific. Their mixture of dialogue and thoughts seemed to flow more smoothly than ever. Off to read ch. 12.