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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would have reviewed sooner, but didn't expect another update as of yet. I really should not try to second-guess you, eh? The last two chapters were darkly beautiful. Your AN at the end really made sense to me. I suspect that everyone who reads its interprets it in their own way, according to the severity, or current happiness, of their life's circumstances. As for myself, after a night of fitful, angry dreams, I was glad to be reminded that love does draw all of those emotions from of as well. The dark side to your feelings of love do not mean that the love has been corrupted, spoiled, or even dilluted. To truly love someone is frightening, and we often run from those feelings believing it is the right thing to do - it is certainly a socially accepted practice these days. But love it always in flux, it is not a very stable emotion, much too complicated for that. And the niggling doubts and heartaches remind us that this amazing emotion does not come without a price. blah, blah, blah, enough of my blabber. I also wanted to say that Kagome's reactions are so delicious. She is still aching for Sess and its so sweetly romantic. Sesshoumaru's inner thoughts of killing and self-deprication were perfect. I love it when someone is not afraid to make him dark. He does not have to be completely good to be worthly of Kag's love, after all. And thank god he didn't kill that poor little one! Whew, you had me worried there for a moment. Also adored Kagome's Mom's reaction to her little affair. Heh, get birth control, hon. Mrs. Higurashi is super-mom. Thanks again for your inspired writing.
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To think, I see your story again and there are two chapters! Oh, so angsty and wonderful. Sesshoumaru is so cute with his inner battle. I can't wait to see him trying not to go to Kag's. That ought to be fun, and angsty. Uh oh. No protection, and didn't Sess notice that she looked a little heavier. Mmm. Poor Sess, I really do feel sorry for him. It seems wonderful for Kag's though, even though she does have plans for college. I can't wait to see how you handle all of this. I hope I am as understanding when my kids take that big step.
Well, again, wonderful writing and a great story.
Snowfall
Well, again, wonderful writing and a great story.
Snowfall
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm leaving you your first ever pre-review.
I have a feeling that I'm going to like Chapter 15 a lot.
Just a hunch :).
I have a feeling that I'm going to like Chapter 15 a lot.
Just a hunch :).
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh ho! This was as wonderfully done as I expected. I loved the interactin between the two and the sexual tension between the two has only intensified. My god, woman, you shouldn't be able to elicit these reactions for me ( or other readers while I'm at it ). It should be illegal or something.
In all seriousness, this chapter really helped to clear up a lot of worries I'd had about Kagome and her injuries. I like the direction that Sessh's thoughts are going as well - the line aobut bonding himself with a horny teen was hilarious.
Kagome is such a trouper. You make her so spirited in this fic and I really am enjoying it.
In all seriousness, this chapter really helped to clear up a lot of worries I'd had about Kagome and her injuries. I like the direction that Sessh's thoughts are going as well - the line aobut bonding himself with a horny teen was hilarious.
Kagome is such a trouper. You make her so spirited in this fic and I really am enjoying it.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well now, please dont let it be that you've gone off and forgotten all of us, and with such a cliff hanger! Come back soon and make an update before I go mad!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*wide-eyed* WOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH...
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Look who's back, and with a wonderful 'aftermath' chapter for your readers! I loved seeing Sesshoumaru racked with guilt. I am so glad that Kagome is still with him and he is taking care of her. Aw, it's so sweet! I hope that Sess will 'see the light' soon - that Kagome just digs him and its possible to be both innocent and hot for him at the same time.
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I keep getting tempted to skip ahead and read chapters of 'Fumbling..' Heh.
Thank you so much for updating. I needed a special treat tonight - I've been thrown up on repeatedly and was a little low-spirited, til I saw that you had a new chapter up.
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I keep getting tempted to skip ahead and read chapters of 'Fumbling..' Heh.
Thank you so much for updating. I needed a special treat tonight - I've been thrown up on repeatedly and was a little low-spirited, til I saw that you had a new chapter up.