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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I'm a french mother of three girls and we love mangas. I beg you to update your wonderful story because I love these characters and find your writing delightful. I can't wait to know if they will find love... Please, updaaaate. Thank you very much !
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OhMan please dont forget about this story. i love it. cant wait for more action between sess and kag. update whenever you can.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear flowers,
I think that was an oustanding chapter and I am really looking forward to the rest of the story. I love how you're story has a flow and style of it's own that makes it come alive in your mind's eye. Keep doing what you're doing, I sure appreciate it. (smile ) PEACE!!!
I think that was an oustanding chapter and I am really looking forward to the rest of the story. I love how you're story has a flow and style of it's own that makes it come alive in your mind's eye. Keep doing what you're doing, I sure appreciate it. (smile ) PEACE!!!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much eep! ^_^ Sessy is a little rough in bed though but oh well. *Shrugs.* Poor kagome if I were in her shoes I wouldnt know what to do, being horny all the time, and not being able to have the guy you want. Specialy if you almost died the first time... O.o Anyways write me to let me know of future updates please.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How did I miss this update!
Your lovely story just keeps getting better and better. I think little Aki (did I get that right?) is so sweet. All those looks, the 'light' conversation, and sleeping in the same room are working together to create a delicious tension. I loved the kiss. Sesshoumaru was such a cold fish about it that I couldn’t help but laugh. It made sense, though, that youkai would not have use for such shows of affection. We’ll have him addicted to such yet!
The last bedroom scene was well-done. What will the results of Aki’s meddling be between the two before Kagome’s little stay is over? Even though Sesshoumaru is coming round (his mind is constantly turning to Kagome) he seems to be regaining some of his self-control. I’ll be curious to see if there is another major ‘break’ in his control, or if there will be more gradual changes, or both. Your writing has many layers. Thanks for that. Have to keep stopping myself from starting ‘Fumbling’, Haha.
Your lovely story just keeps getting better and better. I think little Aki (did I get that right?) is so sweet. All those looks, the 'light' conversation, and sleeping in the same room are working together to create a delicious tension. I loved the kiss. Sesshoumaru was such a cold fish about it that I couldn’t help but laugh. It made sense, though, that youkai would not have use for such shows of affection. We’ll have him addicted to such yet!
The last bedroom scene was well-done. What will the results of Aki’s meddling be between the two before Kagome’s little stay is over? Even though Sesshoumaru is coming round (his mind is constantly turning to Kagome) he seems to be regaining some of his self-control. I’ll be curious to see if there is another major ‘break’ in his control, or if there will be more gradual changes, or both. Your writing has many layers. Thanks for that. Have to keep stopping myself from starting ‘Fumbling’, Haha.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Einfach wundervoll, or for the english and american people out there..... really amazing!! I'm impressed...and not able to express it in words.
As I am german and totally obsessed with english fanfiction especially those about Inuyasha and Hellsing, I came to read quite a lot of
them but I never happened to read one that left me speechless.... congratulations, your writing skills are awesome!!
The realtionship you created between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is exactly as I've imagined it when thinking first about the possibility of such a bonding...complicated and yet wholesome...I really love it.
A relationship always turns out to be quite complicated and vexing, you certainly got that point across in your fic!!
I hope to hear/read more of you (and please update the rest of "Elsewhere" as soon as possible, even though I have already read it
a dozen times I can't wait to read it again!!) and take every small amount of free time you can possibly get to add a chapter to "Fumbling towards Ecstasy".
Yours ever Fuchsia
As I am german and totally obsessed with english fanfiction especially those about Inuyasha and Hellsing, I came to read quite a lot of
them but I never happened to read one that left me speechless.... congratulations, your writing skills are awesome!!
The realtionship you created between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is exactly as I've imagined it when thinking first about the possibility of such a bonding...complicated and yet wholesome...I really love it.
A relationship always turns out to be quite complicated and vexing, you certainly got that point across in your fic!!
I hope to hear/read more of you (and please update the rest of "Elsewhere" as soon as possible, even though I have already read it
a dozen times I can't wait to read it again!!) and take every small amount of free time you can possibly get to add a chapter to "Fumbling towards Ecstasy".
Yours ever Fuchsia
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This, Sesshoumaru, orders you to update this immediately.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Well, Well!!! I almost had my wish to come true. "So close, yet so far away", I think is the saying I have in mind. I haven't given up though (smile) PEACE!!!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers*..Please update...I can't take it anymore
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I missed a lot. It's nice that you gave Sesshoumaru such instinctual responses. But, damn! I would have probably given him more shit about being dragged off and then let him hear me tell my mom exactly what was going on just to piss him off. Sorry, I'm a bit miffed at Sesshoumaru right now, which means that you did a good job. LOL I'm glad you explained your reasoning behind the 'heat'. I know from growing up with a female german shepherd that this is true. But, with humans, before the blood, the female goes through the real heat as her body prepares for impregnation. That would have been a good one to use against Sesshoumaru while he was trying to stay away from Kagome.
I really love the way that you are portraying the two of them. Stubborn, but as respectful, and respectable, as possible. You've done a great job keeping their personalities true to cannon while giving growth at the same time. (BTW, I'm still miffed at Sesshoumaru and if I were Kagome's mother, I'd stomp over to his house and give him a piece of my mind. Kidnapping jerk.)
OMG! The lime was incredibly hot and dangerous. I'm melting. Sex and danger, good combination.
I don't know if I have ever reviewed, but this has been a very intriguing read. I'm going to have to put you into my favorites so that I don't miss out again.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
I really love the way that you are portraying the two of them. Stubborn, but as respectful, and respectable, as possible. You've done a great job keeping their personalities true to cannon while giving growth at the same time. (BTW, I'm still miffed at Sesshoumaru and if I were Kagome's mother, I'd stomp over to his house and give him a piece of my mind. Kidnapping jerk.)
OMG! The lime was incredibly hot and dangerous. I'm melting. Sex and danger, good combination.
I don't know if I have ever reviewed, but this has been a very intriguing read. I'm going to have to put you into my favorites so that I don't miss out again.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave