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by flowers

person Lease242
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I had to read it twice....never tedious and certainly not long enough, you've got me thouroughly hooked. Can't wait for your next story.
person LoupeyLady
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... well... hm... a very powerful story with vivid, living, feeling characters and emotions. Please, please write more.
person dina
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please put a lemon in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i mean they are just begging for it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kaitsurinu
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is so good!!! Lol don't you just sesshy? Good, evil, its all the same! Anyways I can't wait to read the rest of the story!
person Julie
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this story and hope that you will continue to update. Julie :)
person Inu\'sLilKitten
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really think that's great. It's such a differtwistwist, I really like it. I'm here if you need opinions and I'll be posting my own...eventually.

~Kitten