rate_review Reviews

Hiya! Me again ~_^ I'd like to say after reading your reviews on AFF.net, that in my humble opinion, you are by far one of THE BEST storytrs trs that I've come across. As you can tell, I scan several different sites looking for new or updated stories. Most of the time, at least here lately, I've started only looking for completed stories or stories with several chapters already posted. Too many times a brilliant story is abruptely stopped, thus causing much sadness to us devoted readers. So, like a few of your reviewers have already pointed out, don't worry why people are not reviewing. As long as your story is out there, it's going to be read. And there will always be people to let you remember just how wonderfull it is! Ok, I'm laying it on reallly thick! Is it working? I hope so, my brain is beginning to smoke with so much work this late at night! See Ya

hmm...I have no idea what might 'throw people off' (In my experiences it seems a very large percentage just want senseless fluff...who knows ^_^ ). I love dark romantic stories (something wrong with me I suppose, but dark/angsty stories have always appealed to me. Almost positive this predilection stems from reading Wuthering Heights as a kid). Your character portrayals are unique with both chars. being more feasible, that is, easier to respond-to/understand as a reader. Unlike the commenter above, I actually look for stories that have more than 8 chapters posted o_O the more the better hehehe. I really love your story so I'm not sure I can be that critical ^_^;; Keep up the good work! ~ceri

I started reading this story a few days ago. I don't mind a little bit of dark, but the chapter before this new one seemed really out of place. I mean he is eventually going to accept Kagome right??? Anyways, this chapter was much better. I'm glad that they are talking again.

I don't think you're throwing people off and I loved your last chapter and this one.

The problem is you posted so much of the fic at one time that it scared people off. Reading one or two chapters is entirerly different than being presented with 12 chapters at once. It takes a really motivated person with a lot of time to read that much material.

With that being said, I DID read all of your chapters when you posted them because your story sparked my curiosity and I had a few hours to kill. Normally, however, I would probably overlook a fic with more than 10 chapters (no matter how good it is).

On a final note, because now I'm starting to ramble, You have a very good fic here and If you decide to post more, I'll always read and review. Promise

Ja ne,
Gia

Great chapter! Sorry but I can't really tell you what may be throwing people off. Though chapter 17 did seem a little dull compared to your others. Well, can't wait till you update again.

u are doing a great job, the sexual tension is soo thick u can see it! Great writing, keep it up! More sessXkag please! (i love wat he did to Hojo!)

You are doing great!!!!!! People probably just don't realize that you update as frequently as you do (that is NOT a complaint, don't you dare change the frequency of your updates...grrr... ^_^ ). Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter!!!!!!

Oh God no! I read straight through all 18 chapters. I'm soooo eager to read the next! This is such a great story. Please keep up the good work.

I reviewed already once before but I had t it it again. I just wanted to let you know that you shouldn't worry so much what others think. The story is terrific, definitely one of the best in the Inu category. It's very dark but your characters are so full and vibrant and not straying far from the original author's standing. I mean Sesshy is obsessive and who could not see him taking that obsession and transferring it to all aspects of his life. If I had my way, I would want you to update every day till this was finished. I am really anxious to see how this works out. Don't be so hard on yourself, I think Chapter 17 was one of your best and I can see where your concern that it was too much affected this newest chapter. Write what is in your heart - keep it up!

Hey there! Just wanted to let you know that I LOVE this story so please, please PLEASE keep it up!