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loved the new chapter! Yeah, somtiontion would be nice. Please update soon!

OOh I feel a little mischief coming from Kagome...I can't wait to see what she does. Maybe she'll call Hojo or something and make Sess angry...lol

Gia

that's fun

I really hope she doesn't do anything too crazy like climbing into his bed or going for Toukejin...

that would really be stupid..
but she is hung up on him anyway (right phrase?)

migi-chan

Still here. Still reading. Still loving it!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you
^_^

Great story. Extremely well written. The plotline is excellent. Especially since you don't shy away from delicate subjects. You have a very unique and compelling writing style. Don't let ne tne tell you that Sesshoumaru is ooc He's just been 'mellowed' by age. But he's still his same old icy cold self. Any changes that you've made to him are completely believable since time changes everyone not just humans. Although when it comes to Kagome's character I think she's been a little too timid. What's happened to her fiery temper. She's always stood up to Inuyasha. Doesn't she still have all her miko powers. Like her purifying bow and arrows. Just because the well is sealed doen't mean her powers are gone. I know you wrote at one point that she kind of purified Sesshoumaru and it helpled to calm him down. Perhaps she could do that at other times (ie mating) hopefully helping him to keep his cool better. Although not too cool all us fans like him nice and hot. I think I've been reading your fanfic for far too long. I keep meaning to take a break and read something pointless but like a good book I just keep getting drawn back in. I couldn't escape until there was nothing left to read. I can't wait to see more of this. So. So please hurry up and write more. And don't even think of ever abandoning this story or you'll be haunted by all the ghosts of fans who keeled over when they found out you weren't going to continue this story. Keep up the great work.

I have enjoyed your fanfiction so much! I love it, its creative and it keeps to the true nature of that characters. I was getting really sick of the fast change in Sesshomaru's charcter whenever he falls in love with Kagome. This is a story that keeps the reader reading. Oh andaaanaaank You for not letting Kagome get pregnant, thats overused as a fanfiction love excuse. THank you and please update quickley!

well its used in many fics but that is a new point.
the total contral...
I read a lot of sess fics but I can't remember any with this point.

I'll be happy to take links to good fics...


migi-chan

dark? *blink blink* this is supposed to be dark? *poke, search* where is the darkness?

seriously. . .
this is wonderfully written with a well thought out plot, good romance, realistic handling of characters and situations and a very mature tone. . . but dark. . . makes me wonder how much dark stuff you have experienced. . . this is mature, a very excelent balence between angst and romance, with just a touch of well placed violence to add some spice. . .

dark is all violence and angst, blood and rape and mental torture, uncaring and stark. . . i have read a few dark fics. . . one called "Master" which can be found on fanfiction.net(author is RyanOokami) stands out as an excelent example. i have a couple dark fics(and lots of dark poetry). . . my darkest fic is "The Knife-Edge" which is almost finished. one i have recently started is "Hantai no Dekigoto" and the first two chapters have quite a bit of darkness(being brutally raped by two of one's best friends definitely counts as dark), though my muses are pushing for a relitively happy ending. . .

i'm afraid if a truly dark fic is what you where going for. . . well, to be blunt, then you failed. this is wonderfully written though and i wouldn't have it any other way.

sorry. . . i saw dark and i jumped on this story. i guess i'm a tad dissapointed that it wasn't dark. . . i reiterate though, this is an excelent story! i'll be looking forward to more. . . but now i have to sleep, ja mata!

Wow! You update so quickly and this new chapter is excellent. Can't wait for the next!

What can i say?? I really, meaning really like your fic! the ideaveryvery original!! i got a favor to ask u, can u please email me when u update?? thank u!! bulma_secrets@yahoo.com