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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*smashes into brick wall, checks broom to make sure it's ok*
I hate it when that happens. I get so into the story, and then I hit the last word.
*Sniffle*
Anyway, I'm enjoying your flight by the seat of your pants, I'll be tagging along till the end, but slightly to one side. After all, If you're pants are flying, I'm not sure I want to smell why. For all I know, it could be cafeteria bean burritos.
Anyway, as some famous actor once said, "I'll be back!"
*hops back on her magical flying broom-o-doom*
I hate it when that happens. I get so into the story, and then I hit the last word.
*Sniffle*
Anyway, I'm enjoying your flight by the seat of your pants, I'll be tagging along till the end, but slightly to one side. After all, If you're pants are flying, I'm not sure I want to smell why. For all I know, it could be cafeteria bean burritos.
Anyway, as some famous actor once said, "I'll be back!"
*hops back on her magical flying broom-o-doom*
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One word comes to mind..............amazing. Hard to believe this is only your 2nd fic. This is one of the very few stories of this length that has kept me thoroughly engrossed each and every chapter. Your lemon was albeit short but well worth the wait. In other words it was perfect.
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Please keep it coming!
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you updated, I've been waiting patiently..lol. I loved the lemon scene, it was about time those two got together.
Gia
Gia
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. What will Aki do? I'm not sure what you have planned for this story but I hope there will be another lemon in here. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, excellent chapter. I must tell you that you've changed my mind about long fics. This story is definitely worth the read. I'm putting it on my recommended stories list.
Update soon
Gia
Update soon
Gia
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story more with each chapter that I read. Please keep the updates coming.
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to tell you that I am impressed that you have managed to do a "lemon" so to speak and not lose any of the story with it. It seems, in so many stories, that once they get to that pivotal point, that the story just kinda stalls. The scyou you had them in, was crude and to the point, and may I add waaayyyy sexy! But, it was to the point, not too much intimacy considering the nature of the beast. I'm glad to see you are not pushing for the kissy kissy huggie huggie kind of relationship. I think they, or at least he, has too much raw passion for that. Even though they may share affections, doesn't have them eating strawberries in satin sheets. Awesome chapter!
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a neat story, but what in the world is wrong with Kagome that she wouldn't start having her period u col college? The story all made sense up until that...