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Words cannot express how beautiful and tragic this wonderful story is. I loved your new chapters the best and by far they are my favorite. I can't wait to see what happens next and how Kagome's dream is realized. I absolutely love how you kept everyone in acteacter and still managed to write something so good.

Plus, you kept my attention for 28 chapters, which isiraciracle for my part, because I'm so impatient.


Ja,
Gia

"Wow" That's the word that comes to my mind to describe your fanfic. This story is beautifull. I truly am impressed. The caracters are well written and your writting style has a flowing quality to it, one with many details that let us rstarstand and feel everything the caracters feel, their anguish, their sadness, etc... You don't rush things either, making things happen in what I would call a nomal progress...Furthermore, it is not easy to write such a long story and keep it interesting all along, as you did...

So, this is a very good work and I hope to read more soon, and that you will keep on writting afterwards...

GREAT! i hope this story goes on and on! one of the best i have read in a long time! Keep up the uber-great work!!

~MKP

my goodness your such a talented writer with the way describe the story and protray each character.... it is simply pct! ct! especially sesshomaru... god i love it! i am definately putting this one in my favotites list ^^

~ja ne

Thank You for not ending it here!!!!! However, I can't figure out why so many good authors take a stto tto the point of where you just want to know about how they learn to co-exist with each other. Because face it, Sess in this story appears like he would be a VERY jealous mate. You know this would be interesting especially since it's set in modern time. The author of "Dreams" gave her story an everyday look in their lives in that time period! Why can't an author do that with a story set in modern times???? Ok well enough of that... I really loved your story and Thank You fiviniving your readers the pleasure of reading your wonderful story!!!!

My name ought to be listed somewhere, so I'll skip the introductions and get straight to the point... WHERE THE HELL IS THE REST OF IT?! Please oh please oh please post some more soon! I went through hell to get my P.O.S. computer to work and the last chapter turns out to be the worst cliffhanger of all! It's wonderful to read such a well-written story! Your plot twists are excellent (even though they're sadistic, unfair, and generally very evil), your characterization is very complex and well thought-out, and (this usually doesn't matter, it's just a bonus for me) your grammer is nearly flawless! Oh, happy day... (Err... seeing as it's after 11 p.m. right now, happy night would probably be more appropriate) And, before I forget, I must add that I find it very easy to get involved in the story. I hate to admit it, but I had to break out a brand-new box of tissues toward the end of chapter 25. Not too many people can make me do that. =) You are most definitely an excellent author!

Blackkiteekat

P.S. I know reviews really help to motivate me, so I'm praying that this one will motivate you to post the next chapter(s) soon!

please please please please please continue this....dont leave me hanging now! i am so curious as to what will happen. the story is great and cant wait to find out waht will happen. please update soon. i wait ever so impatiently!

This last chapter is really beautiful!! I am amazed at how Sesshoumaru and Kagome relationship has deepened and evolved.

YAY IT'S GETTING HAPPY AGAIN! in 25.. i like.. bawled.. i was soo angry with u! lol but now.. i feel a lil better! yay!

Your story is outstanding! There aren't enough praises to sing for it... I love how vivid in detail it is. It actually brought me to tears in some parts. I just hope you continue with your fantastic storyline to its end.

Much praises,
Tamamiko