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What happened to all your chapters? I saw that you updated, but when I went to read it a whole bunch of chapters are missing! I thought there were 28 chapters but now there are only 12. Are you re-writing the story?

I am enjoying the story. Looking forward to see what happens next. Nice way to write Sesshomaru through the years.

Ah! Okay I just started reading ur story, okay? and I was going on to chapter 12 and then I dunno what happened, but now there's only 3 chapters. It was just getting good, what happened? I want to read the rest of the story

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Words escape me at this moment. I've read from the first chapter all the way to your 28th one. And I'm damn glad I did. It took me all night and to 6 am to get here. I can't believe the...Damn its hard to describe what I am thinking at this precise moment, except to say that I have to place this in the "Best damn story catagory here at Aff.net" if there was such a thing. In my mind this resdides with a few other stories I would praise this highly. I don't give compliments liket this lightly. The range of emotions make mine look like a mockery of writing. One dimentional compared to the mutiple ones found here. I can't wait to see how this is going to end....Until next time! ^_^

This is a really great story. I noticed you h't u't updated in a few months. Are you going to continue to update?

Well-written, mature and plotted so delicately and erotically that I was surprised and pleased by the intricate layers of your story. I don't know how old you are, bour our writing is exquisite and I must say I am so pleased to read a fiction that is grammatically correct, outlined in a way that seems realistic for the antagonist and protagonist and, well, I could go on. I also liked the well-thought out modern day idea of how acceptance is so difficult and the complete breakdown of Sessh.
I can't say enough about your fiction and I hope you continue to write. Elsewhere was incredible. It is stories like this one that keeps me looking and I have bookmarked it to read again in the future.
Good job.

I find myself at aloss for words strong enough to describe the powerfull effect your writing causes. I am truely in awe and also feel slightly jealous of your writing abilities. The way you are able to put deep, heart felt emotions into words that glide so seemlessly together, leaves me in silent admiration.

I look forward to reading any other fic's you may have already written, as well as any you will write in the future. If you han upn update email you send out, I would appreciate being added to that list.

Sincerely,




Dawn H.

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So I read the first chapter so far, and it's one of the more well-written stories on this site, honestly! I have lots more to read, and methinks YOU have a lot more to write, no? Good stuff!

i really like your story. how come you haven't updated in a long time? please update again soon.

Oh my gawd! It took me a day and a half to read thus far st ist ignoring writting my own fic), and all I can say is, your story is wonderful! Absolutly stunning! I loved-Loved-LOVED it. Your writing technique is great, and yor imagination must be vivid beyond belief (Just the way I like 'em.) You really managed to relay the strong emotions very well. And you kept the base of their peronalities sharp to reality, which I alway value in a fic. I usually hate fics where they're set in modern times, but this one just caught my eye, and once I started I just fell in love with the detail. Great job! You shall be the privileged, first story to be in my recomended reading. I do-so hope you keep up the good work!

By the way, If you're interested, since I think great minds think alike, try reading my fic too. Maybe you will like it!
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