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for Overcoming Adversity

by choukitsune

person drake220
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! you updated i'm so excited! a great chapter, especially the teachers lounge scene! hehe! i would pay to see sess go after some y oly old teachers! (DIE ASSAF!!!!! BUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) ::clears throat:: anyway, i notice a little ending that spelled a more accepting sess-kun toward our fav hanyou! not sure if i like that or not. on one hand, familys should stick together but on the toher, its terribly OOC. whatever way, i'm sure i'll like it. update soon with that long chapter you promised!
person szmadad
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo...a new chapter...even tho it was all about Sessh and not Inu (can you tell which brother I prefer?) ;)

Hehe...Sessh has an interest in Inu's - ahem - I mean his family's honor. Excellent -poor Inu needs a break. Poor Sessh has no clue how Rin is changing him. I'm actually enjoying the Sessh-Rin dynamic too.

So back to something from the fight with Naraku's minions..Inu *loves* kagome, huh? Went quickly from a few kisses to love - I guess the 15 year old concept of it. Not that I'm complaining! What about our dear girl Kag? And wait, are they actually officially boyfriend-girlfriend? While this Inu is more articulate than his manga counterpart, I wonder how he'd actually ask Kagome...of course she'd say yes, and then hopefully there'd be more than some basic kissin\tiontion. No, no, I know we're all keeping it clean and light between the two...but there are bases beyond kissing, ne? Ahh..such a hentai I am...
person Mythical Child
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru is so even more so sexy in chapter 13. <3 Wow. You made him so... wow... *drools*

Can't wait for more!
person Jazmine
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE
person Mythical Child
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wish you would update soon.

I'm loving this story.

Inu, Kag, Mir, and Sang has such a cute friendship.

I especially love Sess. <3 Sigh. He's so perfect even if he's so... like that.

^-^

Please update soon?
person Tom
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I think when the time comes, Inu Yasha's wish should be to match Kagome's life time to his. That way they can both live together without Kagome dieing on him.
person Manda
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story, update soon! ^_^
person shaid
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's good. Keep going. please?
person New Fan
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this storygoingoing. I is different from the plot in the anime. I can not wait until
the next chapter. Update soon.
person drake220
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey. cute ending on chapter 12. liked it a lot. i felt bad for inu but it was funny. rin adn sess are great. simply wonderful. when sess hit jaken with a candelabra, i was laughing...it was very humourous. there were some spelling mistakes but nothing glaring or deterimental to the flow of the story. oh, and rin's koto? interesting that bit was. i had the question of why exactly sango adn miroku could walk when putting up the seals and kag adn inu couldn't but decided that i'll just put it down to heights or horomones. all in all, i liked the last two chapter very much.