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for Overcoming Adversity

by choukitsune

person Soranji
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well Geess everyone got it on. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person InTheThroes
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa....

*Fans face with hand*

That was NICE. Very, very nice.


^_O
person Tom
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More Urrah
Semper Fidelis
person szmadad
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lady, you are da bomb! Yippee for an update!

I started grinning when I read your note at the top of the chapter ..lime and lemon alert...and now I'm at a full out happy smirk :P
Finally, finally, finally Kags and Inu are "official" and wow, what a way to become it, eh? I mean, no complicated discussion about feelings and then gettin' down to business...nope it's all dessert before dinner for them....hehe. And that's not a complaint! So, now I can stop pestering you about their status as a couple - nobody touches Yasha's girl..she's HIS! Hehe, but it's so cute that he had to ask her "You're mine now?"

Love abounds, sniff sniff, and I'm sooo happy! Of course, I don't think the football coach is gonna be too happy that 2 of his star players took off...then there is the whole issue of Kags missing a test...and will Sessh be able to smell Inu and Kag all over one another? Will he care that his brother has a girl - a miko at that?

Ooh, I'm so excited about the next chapter.
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Great chapter! heh heh...I can't wair Ser Sesshoumaru's little segway. Or did you just have it in Rin's? O.o Oh, well, like I said good chapter. I can't wait for it, btw, nice pic of Rin and Sesshoumaru. Until next time! ^_^
person Tom
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Some time soon Inu Yasha should get his sword online.
person szmadad
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can I give *you* a cookie? A nice, warm nestle tollhouse one?

I LOVED this chapter...your writing flows so well during the characters' introspective moments; with so much life-death action going on...a little reflection was certainly in order! Poor Sango -thinking that she has no "powers" to contribute to the group...why do I sense that she's about nderndergo a transformation of thinking? :)

I'm glad you didn't make us wait to read what's been going on in the minds of Inu and Miroku. I just love the personalities you're creating for our heros! :)

And I'm assuming we're dealing with reincarnations of Kikyo's former companions in the guise of Inu, Miroku (same as his namesake), and Sango (namesake unknown?). It's nice that Inuyasha's incarnate doesn't bear the same name..

On another note -relationship wise...so Hojo has backed off and Inu-Kag are unofficially "together"...I'm a hentai for agreeing with Miroku but some physical intimacy between the two might be in order, no?

Ahh...I'm sad I'll have to wait for another update...but the stuff you're writing is so worth it. Til then.... :)
person New Fan
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Great chapter! I loved it when Sesshoumaru nearly scared them all spitless! Heh heh! It was great! ^_^ Until next time!
person Tom
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. Keep up the good work.