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Thank you for the clarification!

I kinda thought that when you mentioned Onigumo, you were referring to Naraku but couldn't remember if I had read it in your story earlier or not :)

Still, for one guy to suddenly compensate for 2 top players...and for the coach to go kinda postal on the said players...I still think that some dark magic or mind control is at play....hehe...the coach is actually one of Naraku's detachments, isn't he? How funny would that be...I mean, we all know that high school coaches can be monsters - or mabye possessed (of course I'm going off of memories of my field hockey coaches....very scary...very, very scary) !

Looking forward for the week to pass so I can read what's happening in Sessh's head.

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Another entertaining chapter; your modernization of the story is really clever -case in point, Sango's family killed in a car accident rather than a massacre...and I wonder just how Kohaku helped cause the accident. Poor Sango! It's funny, Naraku only has 1 shard, right? Yet he can still manage to cause so much havoc.

Does Sessh have any thoughts on his lilttle brother dating a human miko? I'm sure he must've smelled Inu all over kagome when he kept her from bowling Rin over...

And wow...Toga was Inu's dad? That IS different. I'm just dying to see how this all plays out the then Inu isn't a reincarnation of Toga..he's just a close descendant..whereas Kagome is a reincarnation of his dad's former love? That's kinda an odd tangle, no?

Looking for the next update :)

Again, you rock. I like your character development chapters so much...and can forgive you for not writing solely about Kag-Inu. I mean, in my *ideal* world, everything would revolve around those two...but that's my little OCD brain :)

There are too many things for me to comment on ...so I'll just say the inane usual comment - your story is so entertaining, I mean it's one of the few that I avidly track on AFF.net

Please don't be disheartened by nitpicky reviews...tho I can see why one would be. I've come to appreciate how difficult it is to be put together a story that is plot driven, entertaining, as well as constantly evolving. And to do it allone\one's *spare time*...I mean, it's not like you're doing this for pay...but more out of your personal interest.

I as a fan of fanfiction am happy that you continue to provide me with entertainment ...and eagerly away the next update!

PS so one guy -Onigumo - has replaced 2 boys? or is the coach under some spell? there's no justice there. hmmm maybe the boys will get on Oni's case to figure out his secret?!

Aaaah to bad that Kouten was not an old flame. That would put Sesshoumaru in even a more fowl mood. Thank you for making
this chapter more on Rin and Sesshoumaru. As you can tell I absolutely love those two characters. I think they should be more
Rin and Sess fics or at least have more story lines. Please more of them if you can and update soon.

Hello again. First off the nation is Nippon not Japan. Call said nation Japan will piss people off.
Semper Fidelis

I loved the lemons. They were needed very much for inu&kag and Mir&San's relationship. Please keep them coming.

yay!!! *hugs u tight* u finally gave the smut!! i tell u i was soo happy....15 chapters of waiting finally paid off... thank u thank u sooooo much

Do you think that Sess and Rin will encounter anything close to what Inu/Kag and Sango/Mir did in the last chapter. Please update soon.

go sango! attack him in the mountains.....hehe. also, the inu/kag thing? ::whistels:: nice! you do a damn fine lemon/lime! any sess/rin in our future?

Inuyasha and Kagome cetainly have a VERY interesting way of making their relationship official! I'm glad that Sango and Miroku worked out their problems. I can't wait to see Miroku's reaction when he learns his ancestor was in love w/Kikyo.