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hey-wha? when did you put out a 2nd chapter??? i go away for a few days adn you update without me! ah! anyways, the 2nd was cute. the little thing with inu adn his mom and doing the cleaning was great. poignant without needing a dentist appointment. the thrid was also nice but really really short. and when i read the a/n at the end of chp2, i freaked out. i was all 'but it hasnt ended yet has it????' thank god! wheew! but- oh, i don't want to do this- inu seems a bit of a demigod, if you know what i mean. if you elaborate more on his flaws, it might expand his character. but yay for kag/inu! always a good thing!

Yup! The manga is in chapter 350 something in Japan... I've read most of the translations online at this site called Inuyasha- Sengoku o-Togi Zoushi. I forget the site's address and can't find it offhand but I'm sure you can find it pretty easily. No pics, just translations.

And your story iettyetty good. The chapters are short, but I like them. MORE MORE MORE.

thank you for blessings us with to more chapters as for Inu ooc it is a A/U you can do that. Yes the manga is still going and it doesn't look like it is going to end anytime soon. website for translations is www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha/ it is up to chapter 350. Please post more of your story soon!

Quite good.

It's pretty good, Youko. I'm enjoying it so far. Inu might be a bit OCC but that's ok with me. Making him arrogant but sweet is good and so far it seems... fun. I like seeing the different perspectives on the same thing. And BTW, no one has seen the end of the series. Takahashi-sama hasn't even finished the manga yet! I think your story is interesting and I'm wondering how mush more interesting you can make it.

More please!

It's pretty good, Youko. I'm enjoying it so far. Inu might be a bit OCC but that's ok with me. Making him arrogant but sweet is good and so far it seems... fun. I like seeing the different perspectives on the same thing. And BTW, no one has seen the end of the series. Takahashi-sama hasn't even finished the manga yet! I think your story is interesting and I'm wondering how mush more interesting you can make it.

More please!

nice beginning so far ;)

it's good so far. I like it! More please?

I hope Inuyasha get taught a lesson. Rich Snub but I believe Kagome could bring him down a peg or 2 or 100. Please post more soon!

Inuyasha and Kagome how they get along so well, WENCH, Sit Boy, and now all you need is Miroku the pervert than you have a soap opera. I hope Kagome Teaches Inu a Lesson i know I would and I mean lots of lessons.