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for Overcoming Adversity

by choukitsune

person Patricia
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite good. Oh I want Sesshoumaru to fail miserably. Or better yet scandalise him with an inappropiate teacher student relationship with.... Rin or maybe Kagura, or Kanna. Hmmm.
person Wasabi
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good job with this fanfiction...I'll see what else you have written. Keep going!
person RaptorChicky
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...how could I NOT see that one coming??? Why do I have the feeling that History class is gonna be REAL interesting?
I love this story! Much better than some of those other high school fics I've read in the past. -makes gagging motions- I enjoyed your little reference to the series with the movie--very kawaii. And I like Mariko's character--why can't more moms be like her?
Anyhoo... I'll be waiting on pins and needles for the next chappie (and may the muses bless you!), wondering how much poo is gonna hit the fan when Inuyasha finds out about our dear Fluffy-chan or when Kagome finds out about Inuyasha's true nature!
person shaid
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's going good. Write more soon, please!
person maria
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sess is a teacher at Inu & Kag's school?! How is Inu going to handle that? Will Sess get into a fight with Inu when he sees him? Oh, another question, when is Inu going to tell Kagome the truth?
person ArtemisMoon
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* Of COURSE my really long review that I tried to leave last night didn't show up. It is shocking enough when I take the time to review on this website (I think I can count on one hand how many times I have) and onethe the few times that I am impressed enough that I take the time to leave a really good one, the wete mte messed up and kept giving me errors because of too many connections...
But, I am very surprised that you've updated between three o'clock this morning and now, lol! Not that I plan on complaining! ^_^ I loved this story so much and wanted to cry when I ran out of chapters to read. It was already super late when I found this story, but once I started, I just couldn't stop reading. And if there had been morepterpters to read, I would have stayed up even later to finish it.
You have a great writing style! It is well put together and easy to read, with only occasional typos. You obviously put some work into your stories, unlike a lot of authors. You also have a knack for writing plots that are heavily character driven. I LOVE stories like that! Your characters are convincing in the fact that you keep a good balance. They are different enough for it to be believable for an AU without taking away the basis of the characters attitudes. Inuyasha is still the jerk we all know and love, while managing to be a little more...modern and educated, I suppose. ^_^ For a first time Inuyasha author, you are doing a very good job!
Oh, and before I forget, I have to comment on your discription of Jaken! I laughed SO hard! A cockroach...that was a great mental image!
I know you just updated, but I hope you update again soon! I'll be looking forward to it!
person shaid
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens... and Inuyasha and Kagome get closer together. YAY! More! ::grins:: REAlly great writing. I hope you post more soon!
person Patricia
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know what you mean as I myself am heading out. Till next time.
person Numisma
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, this takes a turn for the interesting......
person shaina
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope inuyasha gets all the money. He is sooo sweet. I can't wait for their date. More soon please.