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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO Yasha hit a wall...*snickers insanely* Sorry. Found that amusing. LOL XD
Meanwhile...*turns white, clutches chest, falls over choking* OMG OMG OMG OMG. LOL Okay, had my hysterics. Dear Gods, I hpe Yasha kicks some serious ass. *breaks out IY flags* Yasha Yasha he's our man if he can't do it we're fucking screwed! WHEEEWOOHHH! o.o
Way to much sugar for Kitty
I can't wait to see more...and some more Rin/Sess, too cute! *giggles and cooes at them* Meanwhile...Snogage...oh yeah...Kago got snogged mehehehehe...I wanna get snogged...*pout* LOL
Much Love,
Cat
Meanwhile...*turns white, clutches chest, falls over choking* OMG OMG OMG OMG. LOL Okay, had my hysterics. Dear Gods, I hpe Yasha kicks some serious ass. *breaks out IY flags* Yasha Yasha he's our man if he can't do it we're fucking screwed! WHEEEWOOHHH! o.o
Way to much sugar for Kitty
I can't wait to see more...and some more Rin/Sess, too cute! *giggles and cooes at them* Meanwhile...Snogage...oh yeah...Kago got snogged mehehehehe...I wanna get snogged...*pout* LOL
Much Love,
Cat
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh-ho! Getting even better as I continue to read ! I ! I like it a lot and can't wait til the next chapter! Until neime!ime! ^_^
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol, i saw Dawn of the Dead with a few of my frnz... dun got a bf, so i went with a few of my best frnz... BIG MISTAKE. it was one of the worst movies ever. to me at least... imma romantic too! and tht movilot lot is tht when heck is full, the dead wwalkwalk the earth... basically it was all gruesome and had a sucky plot. bleh. but thtz just a view of a romance cravin grl... lol... but like only four ppl survived! doode. it was sad. but after the first half an hour, u get used to the spears goin thru pplz heads... creepy totallie, but i wasn't as scared... lol. anyway... sweet storie! update soon!
btw, if anyone out there has a good charlotte cd, listen to My Bloody Valentine... itz one of my faves... seriously... so funnie! it starts out... "I ripped out... his throat... and called you on the telephone... to take off.. my disguuuuise..." lol... the last stanza is my fave... itz talking bout this guy hoo likd this grl so much tht he killd her bf... the vocals are amazing!
-lilpixi
btw, if anyone out there has a good charlotte cd, listen to My Bloody Valentine... itz one of my faves... seriously... so funnie! it starts out... "I ripped out... his throat... and called you on the telephone... to take off.. my disguuuuise..." lol... the last stanza is my fave... itz talking bout this guy hoo likd this grl so much tht he killd her bf... the vocals are amazing!
-lilpixi
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh...yeah, I get a cookie! I was getting all excited about there being another new chapter to read - wow, 2 in one day! (that would be such a gift...but a cookie is good too!)
Far be it from me to point out a mistake - I have nothing but respect and admiration for creative types like you who can pump out such entertaining and well written fanfiction.
I sure won't complain if Kag and Inu have a long date...just more opportunity for Inu-Kag cuteness. After all, that kiss from the first night has yet to be repeated....
;)
Far be it from me to point out a mistake - I have nothing but respect and admiration for creative types like you who can pump out such entertaining and well written fanfiction.
I sure won't complain if Kag and Inu have a long date...just more opportunity for Inu-Kag cuteness. After all, that kiss from the first night has yet to be repeated....
;)
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My wife Patricia told me about chapter 9. I would have laughed had not an RPG nearly took off my head today. Sesshoumaru never struck me as a conqueror and if he tried, 40,000 of our troops in Nippon along with 38,000 in South Korea would have something to say about that. And if things get too hot, the 9th MEF is 3 days steam from Nippon. Plus we got NBC if we decide we have nothing to lose. Nice Thought patterns though. As it is here in Iraq, I seem to have the bad luck of being tagged by the same sniper since the abuse scandal broke out. Little does the sniper knows is I lost my testicles in the Tet offensive so he is wasting ammo on me. 7 others however he didn't waste ammo. One those poor chaps was still an unbvablvable virgin, who will never know the full joys.
Semper Fidelis
Semper Fidelis
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the latest chapter! I'm not sure if football is that popular over there, like you mentioned, but I believe soccer and baseball are very popular. I do like the idea of Inu in football gear, too! ;)
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...I'm happy to be acknowledged by the author for my review but I'm even happier to read an update! You are doing a *great* job with keeping the plot going forward while allowing us to get to know each character better.
Yippee..for some Inu-Kaq quality time! One question tho...weren't they supposed to go skating instead of seeing a movie? Either way, I'm glad they went aga again :) Ah...and she gets to see him at morning practice....*sigh*...
Hmm...creepy Naraku rears his head. Can't wait to see what's next!
Yippee..for some Inu-Kaq quality time! One question tho...weren't they supposed to go skating instead of seeing a movie? Either way, I'm glad they went aga again :) Ah...and she gets to see him at morning practice....*sigh*...
Hmm...creepy Naraku rears his head. Can't wait to see what's next!
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GOOD STORY AGAIN COUNTINUE WRITING OK THANKS
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it isnt posible for him to fail inu if he doesnt give him the tessiga. i donnow about japan's rules of education but in america u cannot fail a person for personal gain. and it is concidered a bribary or blackmail if he was to do so.
oh, and will inu get anything from kagome and the same goes for sess and rin?
um i cant think of any more questions. but really good job chicka
oh, and will inu get anything from kagome and the same goes for sess and rin?
um i cant think of any more questions. but really good job chicka
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I had a really nice review all done and Aff.net ate it. Just hope it doesn't eat this one. Ahem... As I was saying.
Very well written, incredibly interesting, and worthy enough to read and reread over and over again. The high school setting is
realistically done. The characters are so (in character) it feels as if you are reading the original character straight from the manga or watching them from the show. Great piece of storytelling. :). Loved the way the story flows with just the right mixture of amusement and angst. Great writing. Pulled me in and makes me want to see the rest. Will await an update and continue reading. Sorry if I did not review every chapter but I may when I reread it and I definitely will try to.
Thanks for the great story.
Ras~~~~~~~~~~~
Very well written, incredibly interesting, and worthy enough to read and reread over and over again. The high school setting is
realistically done. The characters are so (in character) it feels as if you are reading the original character straight from the manga or watching them from the show. Great piece of storytelling. :). Loved the way the story flows with just the right mixture of amusement and angst. Great writing. Pulled me in and makes me want to see the rest. Will await an update and continue reading. Sorry if I did not review every chapter but I may when I reread it and I definitely will try to.
Thanks for the great story.
Ras~~~~~~~~~~~