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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello I love your story :) up date soon btw what was with chap22 with only one paragragh of story???
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just to say i love this fic and im beggin you to update
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happened to the last chapter? Im confused!
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21 By Soseimaru
A fluff chapter for you. Sorry no Miroku and Sango this time around, but I caught up on our Sessy and Rin love. Action returning next chapter. Note: I post this without grammar check. Sorry. Husband returning At. Any. Moment. Noe foe for the fine tooth comb over the work tonight. EDIT: Please check youkostarr's modblog and vote on the new poll.
The little girl leaned forward closer to the glass panel that separated her from her chosen puppy. The little white fluff ball hopped back and forth excitedly, its warm brown eyes fixed on the child that it would soon be companion to
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...and thats all that showed up for chapter 21. I'll give you a proper review when I've caught up [I'm only at chapter 3], I was checking to see how many chapters there are in your story [as in, trying to calculate how long I could afford to sit and read before someone dragged me off to dinner ^^] and saw that instead of "Chapter 21" the drop down menu showed "Chapte`," and when I went to it, well, I've copy/pasted all that showed up. Just thought you'd like to know. Arigatou!
A fluff chapter for you. Sorry no Miroku and Sango this time around, but I caught up on our Sessy and Rin love. Action returning next chapter. Note: I post this without grammar check. Sorry. Husband returning At. Any. Moment. Noe foe for the fine tooth comb over the work tonight. EDIT: Please check youkostarr's modblog and vote on the new poll.
The little girl leaned forward closer to the glass panel that separated her from her chosen puppy. The little white fluff ball hopped back and forth excitedly, its warm brown eyes fixed on the child that it would soon be companion to
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...and thats all that showed up for chapter 21. I'll give you a proper review when I've caught up [I'm only at chapter 3], I was checking to see how many chapters there are in your story [as in, trying to calculate how long I could afford to sit and read before someone dragged me off to dinner ^^] and saw that instead of "Chapter 21" the drop down menu showed "Chapte`," and when I went to it, well, I've copy/pasted all that showed up. Just thought you'd like to know. Arigatou!
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Me again. No, this isn't a proper review [GOMENNASAI! *bows profusely*] but another format/website error notification. Actually, I started reading Chapter 11 and noticed that it begins at the end of the expected attack of the shrine. Was there supposed to be a beginning to that scene at the end of the previous chapter [10]? Chapter 10 ended with the description of Sesshoumaru watching life come back into Rin. Well, I'll go back to reading 11 anyway, but I wanted to let you know because AFF has this terrible tendency to cut off and mangle the text of stories. I've seen that too many times here, so maybe thats what happened. [And if I discover in reading chapter 11 that the description of the end of the shrine battle was deliberately done that way, just feel free to ignore what I said here. *sweatdrop*] Good luck with future chapters. Ciao!
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!! Please report chapter 21. And keep it up. I love this story don't give it up.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm... did i miss something? The story went from Sess reviving Rin in ch10 to the end of a battle with Yash and Miroku at the begining of ch11. I am really enjoying this story so far and it is driving me crazy that i have missed what seems to be a significant occurance. If you could e-mail me the missing stuff, or tell me where to find it I'll love you forever! Well back to reading, I'll just piece together the best I can for now.
Ta, Amelita
Ta, Amelita
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have been reading your story and enjoying it very much.
I hardly like the highschool AU's most of the time, but the tie-in to the past and present
rasied the bar for me.
So I read the whole thing in one go!!!. Only I don't know if it is my computer or the site, but this last chapter was cut off after only a few lines??? Well LIke most before me I can only hope for a update soon.
I hardly like the highschool AU's most of the time, but the tie-in to the past and present
rasied the bar for me.
So I read the whole thing in one go!!!. Only I don't know if it is my computer or the site, but this last chapter was cut off after only a few lines??? Well LIke most before me I can only hope for a update soon.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. I noticed you haven't updated in a few months. Are you going to continue to update?
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. However I'm curious as to how I get into the reading area of your website.