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for Assassination

by Titaness

schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_o girl, i so though that the assassin was Kagome. when you popped her into the frame, my head spun! wow. i'm only up to chapter three, and wish i had more time to read, but i don't. :-( so, until next time, your story is going good, i feel so bad for inu. is it bad that i feel awful for kikyo dying? poor girl had everything in the world going for her then bam! (quite literally). it was engraved? wow. that...sucks. can't wait to figure out who the assassin is; i have my idea but i'm not saying. not yet at least. ^__^
person Caitriona
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1
Wasn't Inuyasha the original target of the assassin? Why? Will she get paid more because she made an additional hit? Why is she an assassin in the first place. Isn't AssAssin a funny word?

Chapter 3
I find it interesting that you have Kaede as a youth in this piece. Very interesting. I like what you have done so far. Onto other chapters.
person Caitriona
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

Excellently fabulous chapter. Inu's attempted suicide and Kagome's reaction were sad and completely wonderful. Inu's reaction to waking - thinking Kagome was Kikyou, Sesshoumaru was a drooling angel, heaven wasn't blue - was actually pretty funny, but the depth of his sadness once he truly came to terms with his fiancee's death was heart breaking.

Great Job!
person Caitriona
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok.....where are the rest ofthe chapters?
What do you mean you haven't finished them yet?!?!

This Caitriona is not pleased....
We require more chapters. Write, or the ball gets it!



But really This is an excellent storyline that truly deserves to be finished.
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person bettychan
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to see what happens next. And who is the assassin? I can't wait to find out.
person chanda
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update, oh man now Inu, dosen't know if he loved Kikyo... oh man the tension. Very well written, I do look forward until your next update. Until then,
Chanda
person overview
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha is an ass who does not deserve Kagome. So is Kag's going to get together with Inuyasha or Seshoumaru? I don't know if the I/K stands for Kikyo (hag) or Kagome
person blue_flame
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
b4 i read ur story assasination i must compliment ur a/n it was hilarious!!!! i can't believe i'm reviewing an author's note! this is a first...maybe i am going crazy...whahahahaha :)) *evil smirk*
person blue_flame
schedule April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that fucking whore!!!! i'm glad that witch of hell is dead!!! i must shake the hand of the killer for doing such a marvelous job!!!! whahahahah.... i hope kikyou for once stays in her grave and just Rest In Pieces! R.I.P. is made for a reason people!