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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person youkai mistress
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update already! I'm going insane!!!
person hibi
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh, why do sess and rin have to be so childish?
person Carretta
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, UPDATE SOON!!
person wowowowowo
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a fucking great story! Keep up the GR8T Work!
person Nikki
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude I reviewed like three times before and none of my reviews came up! GRRRRR oh well....just wanted to review the new chapter, hoping that my review will come up again. I mean everything I said in the email I sent...this story is amazing. Great Job and Update as soon as you are able! ^___^
person snowfall
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I've had tears in my eyes toooooooo many times! Don't tell me Sess is going to have amnesia now.
You must love torturing readers as much as I do! I think I know how they feew. w. Grrrrr! I'm all dried up.
Give us a break. Please. Let someone be happy for once!!!!! Let's just skip to her 18th birthday. That would
be nice. BTW. I would like to request your permission to put this story on my website once the construction is
complete-mai-mail me with your answer. I will only be putting up completed stories though since so few of the
stories I admire never seem to get finished. I'm very anxious for your next update. You're an excellent wr,
r,
never boring, excellent grammar and vocabulary, an easy read. You have the best first person story I have
EVER read, including books.
person snowfall
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Another thing, I love how poor Sess finally, in a round about way, insinuates that he wants to marry Rin.
She didn't seem to ponder tveryvery much. I wonder if Sess remembers it. I guess Inu wouldn't tell hiI
I
have tried to review previously, but you know how AFF gets sometimes. Your doing wonderful on hits. You
deserve them, and the reviews!
person New Fan
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaaah, I think that Rin should have choosen Kahaku. He pays more attention to her then Sess. I just
wondering what will Sess do now to upset Rin more? How much can this girl stand. I have a question
that I hope that you can answer whether its in your next chapter or could you email me with the answer.
It seems to me that Rin still have very strong feelings for Kaharu and he for her. Now that we (readers)
know from the first chapter, Rin FINALLY gets her man, will Kaharu be a threat to Rin and Sess budding
relationship. You mention it in the last chapter that Kaharu declared that no matter
who he is with, he will always be there for her. Does that mean in their new relationship (Rin and Sess) will Sess hurt
Rin again and Kaharu come to pick up the pieces. Pleasse update soon and here is my email address: jhurdleann@msn.com ^_^
I appreciate it if you can answer my question. Thanks
person hibi
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
much love for the new chapter. i was wondering what was going to happen to her after the phone call. ^____^ doesn't kohaku get upset? rin and sess are sleeping on his couch o___O
person Sarah
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!! I love sess and Rin together. are you goni to keep working on that Inuyasha and Kagome one. you should its good. Keep reviewing fast like you have been. I will always be a fan of your stories.