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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person snowfall
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You! You have tortured me to death! And, you are still torturing! However, I am glad that you got this chapter up so quickly. Happy that Rin didn't completely lose it and that Sess seems to have completely recovered. Still suspicious of the whole Kagura deal though. Please don't make us wait forever for the next chapter. You're a great writer.
person Cassie
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, wow I love this story I feel as if I was were Rin in the story ( A girl can dream can she) I can't wait until ch.43 comes. I wonder if Rin will change her mind and go out of town with Sesshomaru. And will they finally tell each other that they love each other. Can't wait to read next chapter.
person DracOnyx
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAHHHH!

Ahem . . . okay, now that's out of the way . . .

This story is absolutely amazing. OOC or not, I LOVE it. I don't usually rant about stories, but you have really got me hooked on this. Hell, I just spent thet fet few hours reading this when I'm supposed to be cleaning my darn house for company tomorrow! Geesh!

Please, gods, update this soon!

DracOnyx and her still flabbergasted muses
person ivy
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first of all i hope you had a very happy birthday and that you had a lot of fun. ok i almost cried in this chapter omg when is the suffering going to end i feel so bad for rin but i understand her so much that i see my self in her sometimes and other times i dont even understand her(lol) . please update as soon as possible cause last time you took too long . and again thanx for always writting such great ficts.
person ivy
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first of all i hope you had a very happy birthday and that you had a lot of fun. ok i almost cried in this chapter omg when is the suffering going to end i feel so bad for rin but i understand her so much that i see my self in her sometimes and other times i dont even understand her(lol) . please update as soon as possible cause last time you took too long . and again thanx for always writting such great ficts.
person ivy
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first of all i hope you had a very happy birthday and that you had a lot of fun. ok i almost cried in this chapter omgn isn is the suffering going to end i feel so bad for rin but i understand her so much that i see my self in her sometimes and other times i dont even understand her(lol) . please update as soon as possible cause last time you took too long . and again thanx for always writting such great ficts.
person ivy
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first of all i want to wish you a very happy birthday and i hope you had lots of fun with the people you love. this chapter almost made me cry when is the suffering g to to end poor rin sometimes i see myself in her and other times i dont understand her (lol). please please update as soon as possible last week you almost had me going crazy checking my mail to see if you had updated. another thing i will also like to thank you for always writing stories that truly are one of a kind and never seem to dissapoint. you have become my favorite fanfict writer.
person New Fan
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yippee you have updated. I was really facing a great withdrawl. Why is Rin spiraling down like she is?
I am glad that you are back. Update soon
person animegirl007
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So not you are not that far off from the beginning ....Are you going to continue the story from the two years of them being together or are you going to end it????.
Either way as you know I still love this story and I can't wait for more of it...
person ivy
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first of all i hope you had a very happy birthday and that you had a lot of fun. ok i almost cried in this chapter omg when is the suffering going to end i feel so bad for rin but i understand her so much that i see my self in her sometimes and other times i dont even understand her(lol) . please update as soon as possible cause last time you took too long . and again thanx for always writting such great ficts.