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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person New Fan
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can not end the story there. There is a new one on the horizon and as the author of this
great story you must tell it. How in the hell Miroku and even Kohaku still in Rin's life in this significant way?
Please I hope that you have a story to tell soon.


Awesome story.
person animegirl007
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH HAPPY DAY THEY WILL GET MARRIED EVENTUALITY.......NOW.... HOW LONG CAN I LAST UNTIL YOU WRITE THE SEQUEL.....TO TELL YOU HOSNETLY NOT TO LONG!!!!!... I MIGHT DIE IF I DON'T GET PART II SOON.....SO PLEASE HURRY WITH IT....PLEASE!!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!!!! MORE, MORE...MORE!!!!!!! YOUR FAITHFUL FAN IS WAITING ....GOOD JOB!!!!!!
person hibi
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
does that mean this is the end???
person La
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo awesome...maybe a continuation...but other than that it was sooo beautiful. u are the best :D keep up the good work
person mel
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was soooooooooooooooo amazing Maggz!!!!!!!
person The anime freak
schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update?
person The Anime Freak
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story I have ever read, I was reading it since chapter 17. I hope this story wins some magor Rewards. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeeeee make a sequel! You are very talented you know. You should make a lot of money off this. Wstaystay happy! Keep writng! Austa La veasta baby!
person ivy
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter i wonder whats going to happen next. let me ask you a question are you going to make a sequel of this story
person Rinova
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what is with the Cliffy!?!?!?! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, well please write the LAST chapter soon. OMG, Ur breaking my he.. I.. I can't live without this story. Please tell me if u plan to write another RIn and Sesshy fic.

person Cassie
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh, ohhhhhh!!!!!!!! Rins roubrouble but she really did have fun while it lasted. Can't wait to read what happens with her and Sesshomaru. Really good story REALLY!!!!!!! Don't keep up in suspense and waiting long. Please update soon.