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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person Flor
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BUeno, que puedo decirte???
Ahora que se que hablas castellano pedo poner mejor las cosas. Esta ha sido una de las mejores historias que he leido. Me encantan las Sess/Rin y esta me entanto. Todo fue tan dulce e incluso hubo momentos en que quise matar a Sesshomaru por como trataba a Rin. Si un autor puede hacerme odiar a un personaje que amo, y despus hacermelo amar otra vez, para mi es un exelente autor. Y te ganaste los laureles. Espero seguir leyendo cosas tuyas.
person Tiffany
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my godd....That was such an incredible story. I just finish reading it..Wow it was better than I expected. You should be very proud or yourself. This is one of the greatest stories I ever read. It really touches a person about love and hardship and friendship..It just amazing. And the ending is just perfect....Even though i want it to continue for more but i think u did a great job doing so...Its just so breath taking..im gonna go n call and email to all my friends to read your story...its great..im speechless. thanxs u did a great job and thank you for sharing...
person Danny
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**SQWEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!** I can't believe it's over! I love this story soooo much **TEAR** I think i might enev like it better then "When you were mine" but i can't really say they're both fabulous! Great spelling i didn't pick any misspelled words, great grammer! In fact this Fic is probably better then any novel i've ever read! Anyway i can't get enough of you and am completely obsessed. Can't wait for your next fic! Thanx for WRITING!

Cheeky Little Monkey
person T
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is THE BEST story!!! Encore, Encore!!!!!
person kalina mika
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*takes deep breath and wipes tears from her eyes* that...was wonderful. considering i've been following it since you started writting, im so relieved it ended on a good note. alright enough with the downgrading. THAT WAS FUCKING AWSOME! it has been added to my list of most-loved fics--and i've read enough to fill up a library. also gotta congradulate you on ur other fics whiich are also great im sure, but the only ones ive read are When You Were Mine and Sugar & Spice. it would be great for you to write a sequel with what happens after Sess and Kags first time. im sure you've already considered that and im positive im not the first fan to say this. im just adding in my two-cents. You rock Maggz. keep on writing so i dont have to shoot you. (i mean that in the least violent way) ^_^
person Cassie
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Maggz this is so sweet the ending chapter. I cried reading the last part while Rin is starring out the window at the sea and Sesshomaru finally showing up sleepy and whisering to her that he loves her and says her married name. Maggz please make a sequel to this we need a sequel with the these two, you know like Rin becoming pregnant and the media finding out about they are married. Please, Please, Please make a sequel.
person Lease
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was utterly perfect, that's all I can say.
person CLK
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite Fanfiction of all time it was amazing if you write anymore like this with Rin and Sesshomaru plz. Let me know.
person ivy
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOOOOVEE THIS STORY SO MUCH I CRIED AND EVERYTHING AND EVEN THOUGH I KNEW HOW THAT WAS GOING TO END IT STILL MANAGED TO TOUCH ME I WONDER IF YOUR GOING TO MAKE A SEQUEL BUT I DOUBT IT WELL I LOVED THE ENDING SPECIALLY THAT AT THE END THEY END UP MARRIED . VERY GOOD JOB AS ALWAYS
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent!! I enjoyed it!!