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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person alien*ryoko
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
prelude to a love affair??? there will b more??? YAY I WANT M!! S!! SO GOOD THERE MUST BE MORE!! im a suker 4 forbidden love. plz post more,s fis fic's awesum.
ryoko-chan
person me
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing you shoul add more chapter like about the trouble they goe thru trying to hide there relationhip
person Hillary
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow
person New Fan
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I hope that there will be more in the future. Update soon.
person New Fan
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I hope that there will be more in the future. Update soon.
person videl loves goKU
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RIN AND SESS! RIN AND SESS! RIN AND SESS! I absolutely love,adore,live Rin and Sess. they are my fave couple and now....AND NOW you started an amazing stories with them....teehee I am sooooo excited. Thank you...its great...wonderful...awesome...write more as soon as you can I love it. As for When he was Mine...I have missed so many chapters of that...sorry for not reviewing but I have been reading much lately...i will prolly in a week or so I have final exams I have to do first....but anyways this a flippin great chapter....love it...write more or else got it? ^__^ teehee i will wait patiently for the next chapter just don't make it too long eh? ok ok love it...your a great writer keep up the amazing work!

~Videl loves goKU
person shaid
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh.... I like that.
person animegirl007
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! you should let people know should is a Sess/Rin pairing ....the whole setting of the story was gre..I ..I am just awe of the ficton....PLEASE READ MORE SESS/RIN FICTIONS......