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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this updates...how they soon the events that led up to them being more intimate, it's great ....MORE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
review for chap one.... I like Maggz girl very nice... I can't wait to move on.... although I may take awhile to catch up on all of it... just wanted you to know .... I am here and loved chap one.... woohoo....
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH! This is so GREAT! SO CUTE! Great Job! I love how you explained their relationship in the first chapter and now you are going to through and telling us how they came to love each other....oooo I can't wait till you write more...I am so eager to find out, how deep their relationship gets, and how sess starts to handle it....ooooooooo I can't wait....GREAT JOB! LOVED IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE...PRETTY PLEASE!
~Videl loves goKU
~Videl loves goKU
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have no words...absolutely no words...obessed maybe...lovin it definately...going to go nutz cause this is like one of my favorite stories - ABSOLUTELY! Damn, your such an amazing write and I adore you and your story!! HEHEHE I can't wait till you get the chance to update again...I just love it, adore it, can't live without it..okay I think Im obessed with your story. Hehe j/k....Good luck and thank you so much for writing a rin/sess story!
~Videl loves goKU
~Videl loves goKU
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He's being so nice to her, he's intrigued with her. I really like this story, it's interesting. Love it! Truly do.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely adorable...I love it...have i said that already? I don't know if I did or not...oh well ans...s...GREAT GREAT, grrr I need to lay off the caffine...um I like the fact that we will go through the process of Rin and Sess "falling in love"...it gives the story depth and makes it interesting....can't wait for more...but I have a question...will you go into the future at anytime or after you finish retelling...just wondering...its all good when you write so no worries...ok well I NEED to go to bed....GREAT JOB...love it...absolutely love it...can't wait for more...update when you can please. Thank you for writing an Rin and Sess fic too.
~Videl loves goKU
~Videl loves goKU
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this bea beautiful story. I like Sess's OOCness. Update soon!
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am speechless............................utterly amazing write!!!!!! You have got me hooked, line annkernker. I pray you update fast.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey *sticking my tongue out to ANY one that complainis abOOC-OOC-ness* Great story. I don't care OOC-ness or whatever. You wrote it EXCEPTIONALLY WELL *another raspberry to them* Chapter 1 was great!! The other ones were good too, but #1 really stood out. Sess has the hard outside and I believe there's more to him than just being cruel, I think he has a very deep caring inside that he just protect from the world....except Rin. Keep writing like you do. That's what these fanfiction places are for, to write and share our own fantasies of the characters we love!