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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uh... hi! i was just wondering are you going to continue to write " Take Me Home "? itz like my favorite story by you... so yea... this story is good too though! but i just hoped you'd write more for Take Me Home...
-a fan
-a fan
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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story.. i love all sess and rin stories but so far i love this one. please update soon
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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This fanfic is fantastic.
And they are so cute together!!
please keep writing
Th
This fanfic is fantastic.
And they are so cute together!!
please keep writing
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the chapter. When will Rin and Sess 'relationship' started to go sour. Please update soon.
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohmygosh this story is so sweet! I can't wait to read more! Where did he take her!!!!!!!!!?????????
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this is realy great even if sessy is realy ooc after you finish with the past go backto the present and workon what happens after the 1st chapter 'cause by starting \w the lemon you murdered all of the anticipation (even though i know you probaly started it as a one shot) and you might be able to fix that by focusing on thier relationship just dont give up on the story its great
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so cute....damn it run out of words to praise this story...LOVE IT, AMAZING. GREAT, ADORABLE (have i used that one before?), AWESOME, WONDERFUL, PERION!ION! Pleeeeeease write more, i need more....i adore how we are finding out how they fell in love...please write a new chapter soon.
~Videl loves goKU
~Videl loves goKU
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think i already wrote tjis in an earlier review for "When He Was Mine" but i'll say it again to make sure you know i'm tell you the truth, I LOVE YOU! YOU ARE COMPLETELY PERFECT AND THIS IS ONE OF YOUR BEST STORIES EVER!!!!!!!!!!
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, so sweet! Your fic is just perfect, you're an amazing writer. Update soon!
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG, so cute....so cute...and they kissed...(a little one but that's not the point)! Your such an amazing writer please keep this story up...its just wonderful!!! Thank you for writing it...can't wait for more!
~Videl loves goKU
~Videl loves goKU