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for Innocent Beginnings

by inumag

person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, you go Rin! I'm happy she's finally going to try and get over Sesshomaru. Even though I doubt it'll last very long.
person Lease242
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you don't make your living writing professionally, you may want to consider a career change. Only onmon mon and I get lost in this story every chapter. Wow. Can I adopt you?
person drake220
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::winces:: poor rin.....man, the beginningof rin's bad stage is coming. i really like kohaku's character here. if nothing happens with him (and i know there isnt),c an you do a split off fic with him? i just really like him. can you clarify if he likes rin as in like like? thnkas adn keep up the great work!
person Vyle
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Maggz! ;) I really luv the type of tories U make for Inuyasha. I especially loved WHWM. I was kinda hopin' (b-cuz I'm such a Inuyasha Hara addict) if U could make a one-shot follow-up for that story. I'm sad the story over but I just wanna know what happens to them a bit. I would be really happy if U could consider this whenever ya got the chance.

But besides that....this story ROCKS and so do U!! Peace and rock on til' the break of dawn, sista! :)

-Vyle G. (dedicated M-fan)
person Vyle
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Maggz! ;) I really luv the type of tories U make for Inuyasha. I especially loved WHWM. I was kinda hopin' (b-cuz I'm such a Inuyasha Hara addict) if U could make a one-shot follow-up for that story. I'm sad the story over but I just wanna know what happens to them a bit. I would be really happy if U could consider this whenever ya got the chance.

But besides that....this story ROCKS and so do U!! Peace and rock on til' the break of dawn, sista! :)

-Vyle G. (dedicated M-fan)
person New Fan
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You go ahead Rin. Go and find yourself. Update soon.
person Pinkstockings
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one
Beautiful, just beautiful.
person me
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is great keep it up
person New Fan
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sess has competition. Just what the relationship needs. Update soon.
person drake220
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well well! kohaku the sex god! amen! hehe. great descriptions and the camraderie between the two is great. sess is totally going to freak out when he hears how hot tutor boy is. because we all know what 'tutoring session' REALLY means! haha! i hope he catches the two of them flirting! oooh, he'd blow a fuse! great chapter! rin deservesa ife outside of sess!